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KB.
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I like the way you talk the memories never fading, and then bring it together with the words and passion fading away. Good open/close. Nice flow to it, good rhythm.
Life ain't linear.
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Lovely poem. I liked the way you imaged.

A title..."Ode to the One I Kicked to the Curb" I'm only kidding ofcourse.
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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