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loneliness

Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:28 pm
by guppy
loneliness



it hits you in a crowd..slams into your chest

the emptyness of your life

the sacrifices made

it cuts through your heart as sharp as any knife

day in day out

you get up and make it through your day

always longing to hear the words that only a man can say

beyond the words you need them to come from his heart

otherwise they are only sounds bouncing around an empty room

as empty as the dreams that are slowly ....

slipping away

loneliness

Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 4:17 am
by Tater Tazz
That is sooooooooo true.

loneliness

Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:41 am
by koan
very good poem, guppy.

I'm really impressed. :-6

loneliness

Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 9:04 am
by chonsigirl
Very good, guppy!

loneliness

Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 9:06 am
by Pheasy
Wonderful poem Guppy :-4