Let me in

Carl44 · Post by **Carl44** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 5:22 pm

you have real talent pinks:-4

Chookie · Post by **Chookie** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 5:24 pm

Pinky;535505 wrote: ...that you will someday let me in.

What's it worth?

Remembering that you still owe me (hehehehehe)

koan · Post by **koan** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 5:30 pm

I was listening to REM while I read that.

"I think I thought I heard you try"

It's not just a dream though. I'm sure of it.

Chookie · Post by **Chookie** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 5:31 pm

OK, pay up.

koan · Post by **koan** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 5:47 pm

Pinky;535517 wrote: I'm very trying at the best of times:rolleyes:

just to be sure... I didn't mean you "trying" to do poetry.

The poem was wonderful.

Rapunzel · Post by **Rapunzel** » Wed Jan 31, 2007 5:49 am

Thats a beautiful poem Pinky.

Have you seen "Night at the museum"?

It sounds exactly like something Sakageweah (sp?) might say!

Uncle Kram · Post by **Uncle Kram** » Wed Jan 31, 2007 6:03 am

Pinky;535505 wrote: Forever waiting, frost covers the ground,

longing to be inside where warmth abounds.

Knocking on the window to no avail

calling to you, hoping my voice will prevail

upon you to let me in, let me in.

The glow from inside warms my soul

gives me hope that I can be whole,

but I can only see it, a reflection on glass

hands too numb to feel it, hoping it will pass

if you let me in, let me in.

Too much mist around me, around you

confuses the senses, obscures the view.

Moving closer to the panes I call again

Wishing, hoping my pleas are not in vain

that you will someday let me in.
Commendable as always Pinky. Were you locked out in the garden at Spots place when this creation came to mind?

Post by **Betty Boop** » Wed Jan 31, 2007 6:29 am

oh Pinky that was good, so good it made me :-1 :-4

Post by **Betty Boop** » Wed Jan 31, 2007 9:08 am

Pinky;535829 wrote: Jeez, sorry Betty, I didn't think:-5

Sometimes I base my stuff on things I've been reading, or songs that I've heard. Sometimes they're how I feel, other times they're not...I didn't mean to write one that would hit home a bit much to a dear friend...I'm sorry!:yh_hugs

S'ok Pinks don't panic, you haven't upset me that much! Honest!!