Can someone help me?

foriya4 · Post by **foriya4** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 1:23 am

I have written many stories on different subjects and I would like to share these with other people so that I can expand and develop my skills on writing. I don’t have much experience in this but its my passion, because for me writing is a dream which elevates me to the peak of the mountain and then brings me down to the deep depths of the valley, it’s like a adventure where I have just started to explore and I know someday I will reach there. Can someone help me? Thanks!

kayleneaussie · Post by **kayleneaussie** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 1:25 am

Cant help but good luck with it:)

Post by **jones jones** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 1:37 am

foriya4;792481 wrote: I have written many stories on different subjects and I would like to share these with other people so that I can expand and develop my skills on writing. I don’t have much experience in this but its my passion, because for me writing is a dream which elevates me to the peak of the mountain and then brings me down to the deep depths of the valley, it’s like a adventure where I have just started to explore and I know someday I will reach there. Can someone help me? Thanks!

i am a writer ... what kind of help are you looking for? are you lookinf for critiques? do you want me to read your work? are you looking to publish? do you write fiction or no fiction?

Jj

querika8 · Post by **querika8** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:01 pm

Passion is the source of energy and willingness to make the things go on the path you want. I have myself not being a good writer but recently I have joined a community which is making things happen. Here we write stories which go through [minimum submission terms inadequate to post a URL - moderated] and are ranked by amateurs and professionals which help us to know a layman’s view as well as a master’s view on the subject. Later, the best is submitted to a large directory which is a collection of chapters. In this way it helps us to polish our skills and make the best come out. I would certainly advice you to make a presence here as your mountains and valleys will be met at a single place.

Post by **jones jones** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:08 am

querika8;793877 wrote: Passion is the source of energy and willingness to make the things go on the path you want. I have myself not being a good writer but recently I have joined a community which is making things happen. Here we write stories which go through and are ranked by amateurs and professionals which help us to know a layman’s view as well as a master’s view on the subject. Later, the best is submitted to a large directory which is a collection of chapters. In this way it helps us to polish our skills and make the best come out. I would certainly advice you to make a presence here as your mountains and valleys will be met at a single place.

huh! hmmmmmmmmm ... ya lost me here dude ... i'm like a writer an author ... not a new age hippy!

I would certainly advice you to make a presence here as your mountains and valleys will be met at a single place.

what the **** does the above mean?

man i can't decide if you are serious or if you are taking the **** out of me here!

in any event i think maybe you should stick with the "Master" you mention ...

you are way too far out for ol' Jj!

littlemissgiggle · Post by **littlemissgiggle** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:35 pm

Good luck with this

Pheasy · Post by **Pheasy** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:40 pm

You are doing good jj, I'm sure you can help these umm 2 people - good luck with that :wah:

Post by **jones jones** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:49 pm

ThePheasant;794993 wrote: You are doing good jj, I'm sure you can help these umm 2 people - good luck with that :wah:

huh? you know something about this i dunno cutie??

Jj :-4

abbey · Post by **abbey** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:02 pm

jones jones;794306 wrote: huh! hmmmmmmmmm ... ya lost me here dude ... i'm like a writer an author ... not a new age hippy!

I would certainly advice you to make a presence here as your mountains and valleys will be met at a single place.

what the **** does the above mean?

man i can't decide if you are serious or if you are taking the **** out of me here!

in any event i think maybe you should stick with the "Master" you mention ...

you are way too far out for ol' Jj!Dont take it personally Jj, methinks he's just building up to hit us with a link too another site. :-3

Post by **jones jones** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:11 pm

abbey;795050 wrote: Dont take it personally Jj, methinks he's just building up to hit us with a link too another site. :-3

see what a wuss i am? what an innocent computer/internet virgin?

jeez i so hate being taken like this"

sob ... :-1

Post by **spot** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:20 pm

The pair of them have danced this dance before.

As, for example, at http://www.englishclub.com/esl-forums/v ... 9&p=345309

Post by **jones jones** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:29 pm

bastards! ... tricking an innocent virgin like that! :-5

Pheasy · Post by **Pheasy** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:50 pm

jones jones;795011 wrote: huh? you know something about this i dunno cutie??

Jj :-4

Don't even go there - you will force me back into hibernation :wah:

Post by **jones jones** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:58 pm

ThePheasant;795157 wrote: Don't even go there - you will force me back into hibernation :wah:

so how come YOU knew who they were and i didn't ... ah ha! they caught you once didn't they? didn't they?

go on sweetie ... admit it ... ol' Jj won't tell anyone! :wah:

Post by **spot** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:59 pm

I give everyone the benefit of the doubt too. It's an essential.

YZGI · Post by **YZGI** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:06 pm

I'm a writer also. Mainly short stories. If it is more than a paragraph then its a novel.

Post by **jones jones** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:12 pm

YZGI;795194 wrote: I'm a writer also. Mainly short stories. If it is more than a paragraph then its a novel.

nuh ah! i bin caught out once ...

i try NOT to get kicked twice by the same donkey!

Post by **spot** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:16 pm

jones jones;795204 wrote: i try NOT to get kicked twice by the same donkey!I'm also short if novel. it is more than a stories mainly. a then its a writer paragraph.

YZGI · Post by **YZGI** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:17 pm

jones jones;795204 wrote: nuh ah! i bin caught out once ...

i try NOT to get kicked twice by the same donkey!
So, you took an ass kicking?:wah:

Pheasy · Post by **Pheasy** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:19 pm

jones jones;795173 wrote: so how come YOU knew who they were and i didn't ... ah ha! they caught you once didn't they? didn't they?

go on sweetie ... admit it ... ol' Jj won't tell anyone! :wah:

ol' Jj is going to get a pheasy slapping in a minute :sneaky:

Post by **jones jones** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:25 pm

ThePheasant;795220 wrote: ol' Jj is going to get a pheasy slapping in a minute :sneaky:

is that a promise or a threat? :-4