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el guapo
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fallin down was the way to go

heading for that fading glow

when i got there was turned away

not my time the voices say

back to life be on ya way

so back to life i go today

have my friend right here today

glad to be happy

happy to stay

till it my time to go away

with my friends happy to stay



see jimbo not all doom and gloom
"To be foolish and to recognize that one is foolish, is better than to be foolish and imagine that one is wise."
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I enjoyed reading both of those - thank you. And I hope you are feeling happier :-6
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Ybird;645366 wrote: I enjoyed reading both of those - thank you. And I hope you are feeling happier :-6


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my rhyme box's dead But my names not fred and my eyes aren't red...So go to bed!
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Post by pinkchick »

Nice one el taco :p
Very nearly perfect ... :D
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