Breathe on me, breath of God.

SuzyB · Post by **SuzyB** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:24 am

Just wanted to share with you guys a poem that my 10 year old daughter wrote.

Breathe on me, breath of God.

Breathe on me, breath of God,

Fill me with the Holy Spirit,

That I forgive everyone who sins,

And love everyone you do.

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Breathe on me, breath of God,

Fill me with love,

Until my love runs out,

And if I do this, God will love me, like he loves you

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By Jenna aged 10

WonderWendy3 · Post by **WonderWendy3** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:27 am

Absolutely Wonderful!! Very impressive!! I love it, thank you for sharing!!

Bless you sweet Jenna!!:-4 :-4

SuzyB · Post by **SuzyB** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:31 am

I'll have to find some other pieces she has done, she had mass today and read that poem out, I am so proud of her, Jenna is dyslexic, so learns her words off by heart so she doesn't have to read from cards.

I just had a phone call with her Drama Exam results, she got a merit, 2nd highest :-6

SuzyB · Post by **SuzyB** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:31 am

Idgie;631957 wrote: This was beautiful SuzyB! :-4

Thank you, that was Jennas hard work :-6

Love the avatar piccy :-6

WonderWendy3 · Post by **WonderWendy3** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:34 am

SuzyB;631963 wrote: I'll have to find some other pieces she has done, she had mass today and read that poem out, I am so proud of her, Jenna is dyslexic, so learns her words off by heart so she doesn't have to read from cards.

I just had a phone call with her Drama Exam results, she got a merit, 2nd highest :-6

awww, how wonderful! I'm so happy for you, I know you are proud!! :-4 :-6

sunny104 · Post by **sunny104** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:35 am

that's beautiful, she definitely has talent! :-6

zinkyusa · Post by **zinkyusa** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:39 am

Wow, from the mouths of babes

SuzyB · Post by **SuzyB** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 10:58 am

sunny104;631966 wrote: that's beautiful, she definitely has talent! :-6

zinkyusa;631967 wrote: Wow, from the mouths of babes

AngelEyes82;632004 wrote: wow Suzy you have a talented daughter!!

:-4

Thanks guys :-4

beautyful · Post by **beautyful** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:20 pm

that was so nice :-4 you must be so proud of her

G-man · Post by **G-man** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:53 pm

Wow. Ten years old? That's very beautiful. You must be so excited at your daughter's brilliance.

along-for-the-ride · Post by **along-for-the-ride** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:05 pm

Lovely!

That young lady of yours has talent.

pinkchick · Post by **pinkchick** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:08 pm

Suzy - that is so beautiful. Bless Jenna's little heart

:-4 :-4

Ted · Post by **Ted** » Thu Jun 07, 2007 6:56 pm

SuzyB:-6

Excellent piece of work. May she never lose her creativity. It is far to precious and few manage to maintain it.

Shalom

Ted:-6

kazalala · Post by **kazalala** » Fri Jun 08, 2007 4:26 am

Your daughter sounds like a wonderful person already:-6 :-4

SuzyB · Post by **SuzyB** » Fri Jun 08, 2007 8:23 am

beautyful;632104 wrote: that was so nice you must be so proud of her

magenta flame;632226 wrote: Gee suze she must have a very dear heart, that daughter of yours.

Congradulations ! there's something special there:)

G-man;632231 wrote: Wow. Ten years old? That's very beautiful. You must be so excited at your daughter's brilliance.

along-for-the-ride;632241 wrote: Lovely!

That young lady of yours has talent.

pinkchick;632247 wrote: Suzy - that is so beautiful. Bless Jenna's little heart

Pinky;632350 wrote: That's brill...she should keep writing!

Far Rider;632421 wrote: Takes my breath away thats for sure! Well done Jenna!

Ted;632509 wrote: SuzyB

Excellent piece of work. May she never lose her creativity. It is far to precious and few manage to maintain it.

Shalom

Ted

kazalala;632711 wrote: Your daughter sounds like a wonderful person already

Thank you guys , Jenna has written quite a lot of poems, but she isn't very confident with her dyslexia, but I am going to show her all these replies and I know she will be made up :-4 :-4