Dreams

WonderWendy3 · Post by **WonderWendy3** » Fri May 11, 2007 6:42 pm

Beautiful as usual!! Awesome!!

chonsigirl · Post by **chonsigirl** » Fri May 11, 2007 6:45 pm

Oh, PInky, this is so good!:)

Tater Tazz · Post by **Tater Tazz** » Sat May 12, 2007 4:18 am

Beautiful poem!

pinkchick · Post by **pinkchick** » Sat May 12, 2007 4:28 am

Pinky;611179 wrote: The moment of conclusion

ultimate retribution

Exploding the past

Imploding my heart

Drifting on clouds

of dreams unfulfilled

Thoughts and dreams

ever unexpressed

The forgotten moment

forgotten chance

I long for the past

the dreaming expanse

the shadows cast

will forever last

in my reality

so unfortunately.

Bring me dreams of hope

hold me now, hold me fast

Smother me in love

erase my past

My dreams hold only you

A longing too

hard to fight

only fulfilled at night

the dreams I hold

beautiful and bold.

Love it:-4

Mia · Post by **Mia** » Sat May 12, 2007 6:56 am

Pinky being new to the group this is a side of you I had not seen. You are very talented,that is so beautiful

Pheasy · Post by **Pheasy** » Sat May 12, 2007 7:24 am

Have you ever published any of your poems? They are excellent and really heart moving. :-4 :-4