Stuck on Magnetic Poetry

[RedGlitter]

I have a new toy!

I've been playing at http://www.magneticpoetry.com/play.html

Here's my new poem. Remember it's poetry- it's not supposed to make sense.

Now go make something...it's fun!

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seep the wet velvet sky

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sacred woman trust

with your warm poison smile

would worry surround yesterday

translucent time

pierce vast universe

seep the wet velvet sky

[koan]

I used to love fridge poetry but it really messes up the fridge door. Nice there is a cyber version.

[Fibonacci]

Here's Mine



Whoa



Slather More Zeal When

You Word Verbose Vicissitude

Use Torpid Temerity

To Every Faction Would

Your Scholar Was Sanguine

Which Will Veil Some Tinge

Who We Understand With Guile

For Thought Hence



:o

[RedGlitter]

Fibonacci;576226 wrote: Here's Mine



Whoa



Slather More Zeal When

You Word Verbose Vicissitude

Use Torpid Temerity

To Every Faction Would

Your Scholar Was Sanguine

Which Will Veil Some Tinge

Who We Understand With Guile

For Thought Hence



:o


:eek: That sounds...turgid!

[Fibonacci]

I just threw It together.



Had No Idea what I was Doing.

[koan]

ode to beauty

vivid, young silhouette

wild but sculpted

the rhythm of my heart

stands, in time, as a monument



(i got tired of looking for the filler words so i kind of cheated)