Morning Delight

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chonsigirl
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(a rictameter-so un-diet coke for me! But I wrote it for someone who does drink the brew......:) )

coffee

morning’s first scent

wafts under my closed eyes

that slowly open, as I yawn,

heading for the “X on the treasure map,

the daily delight as I rise

and sip it’s sweet nectar

my first cup of

coffee
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Thanks Pinky. :)

Maybe it will be appropriate for Pammie this time of the day.......................:)
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Post by cherandbuster »

I like the rhythm of that one, Chonsi :)

Nice job :-6
Live Life with

PASSION
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Post by guppy »

i feel just that passionate about diet mountain dew.:-4
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Post by lanaia74 »

Totally AWESOME!
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