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Bryn Mawr
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That is *so* powerful - I will cry myself to sleep tonight.
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Pinky;467549 wrote: Oh gawd, I'm sorry!!!!

I feel really bad now!:-3


The idea of good poetry is to convey emotion and you've succeeded in spades.

Do not regret that or apologise for it but be proud for the quality of your work.
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Totally AWESOME!
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Pinky - You never cease to amaze me. I think this is your finest work to date :yh_star


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((((((((((((((((( Pinky )))))))))))))))))))

WOW
"Life is too short to ski with ugly men"

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A very powerful poem, dear Pinky. Well done!:)
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Pinky, very moving.
You can't control the wind, but you can adjust your sails.
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Bryn Mawr;467551 wrote: The idea of good poetry is to convey emotion and you've succeeded in spades.

Do not regret that or apologise for it but be proud for the quality of your work.


What Bryn said.

I LIKE it.
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Wooo Pinky gave me goose bumps lady.. EXCELLENT.. :cool:
ALOHA!!

MOTTO TO LIVE BY:

"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, champagne in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming.

WOO HOO!!, what a ride!!!"

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Dang! pinky that is beautiful and very poignant. i love it. :-4
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