Hundred Acres Wood (triple rictameters)

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chonsigirl
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Hundred Acres Wood (triple rictameters)

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Pooh Bear

spies honey tree

and rumbles his tummy.

“Who could resist golden wonder?

as he scrambles up the tree and gets stuck!

The philosopher teddy sighs

as he waits for rescue

by dear friends of

Pooh Bear.

Piglet

trapped by a storm

writes a message for help,

placed in a glass bottle it floats,

as a nearby chair becomes a life boat

Pooh Bear sails by in honey pot,

waterfall tips them both

as Pooh catches

Piglet.

Tigger

bounces to door,

knocking for his breakfast

and finding “yuchy honey, tells

stories of the Heffalumps and Woozles,

snitchers of honey and bad dreams

for innocent teddies,

but not for brave

Tigger.
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Hundred Acres Wood (triple rictameters)

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That is very cool, Chonsi. I've always loved poetry and appreciated its rhythm even though I have never fully understood all the parameters. :)
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Hundred Acres Wood (triple rictameters)

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It's visually beautiful too :-6
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