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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:42 pm
by Lady J
Love defies anything,

No conditions.

Love reigns with its inner feelings

and intuition.

It will often lead us down a path

Rocky in places, grassy in others,

But will always give us a place to rest.

To take a deep breath.

Eyes opened wide and realize

We are blessed.

Lady J

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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 12:10 am
by littleCJelkton
Really good stuff. I dissagree a bit with the message, but it is good poetry and use semirhymes to end your stanzas

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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 12:27 am
by jones jones
Short and to the point. Good prose.

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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:03 pm
by Lady J
littleCJelkton;1386586 wrote: Really good stuff. I dissagree a bit with the message, but it is good poetry and use semirhymes to end your stanzas


Thank you, littleCJelkton. :yh_smiley

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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:15 pm
by Lady J
jones jones;1386590 wrote: Short and to the point. Good prose.


glad you approve!!