Love defies anything,
No conditions.
Love reigns with its inner feelings
and intuition.
It will often lead us down a path
Rocky in places, grassy in others,
But will always give us a place to rest.
To take a deep breath.
Eyes opened wide and realize
We are blessed.
Lady J
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- littleCJelkton
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Really good stuff. I dissagree a bit with the message, but it is good poetry and use semirhymes to end your stanzas
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Short and to the point. Good prose.
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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littleCJelkton;1386586 wrote: Really good stuff. I dissagree a bit with the message, but it is good poetry and use semirhymes to end your stanzas
Thank you, littleCJelkton. :yh_smiley
Thank you, littleCJelkton. :yh_smiley