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Evolution

Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:08 pm
by Lady J
Just like the tortoise

Retracting into its armor

I seek protection,

From your offensive ways.

Much akin to the coiled snake

Resting in the shade of the elm

I will bide my time;

Then hiss out and strike you down.

An ape rises,

Scratches his arm pit

Sniffs the breeze

Snorts, stares

and leaves.



5/27/2011

LadyJ

Evolution

Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 9:33 am
by jones jones
I do believe that this could be the best piece of prose you have ever written! I stand in awe at how your writing has improved over the years. Well done! :-6

Evolution

Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 9:17 pm
by Lady J
Awe, Baby....my writing has only improved cuz of your guiding hand and knowledge.

Thank You.....:-4

Lady J