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Posted: **Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:48 am**

Hi to All...

I want to share a poem on happiness.....

Happiness Is HapPinESS

Happiness MAkEs you wHispEr,

Happiness MAkes YoU Love,

Happiness Takes comManD.

Happiness MakeS You Calm,

Happiness GiVEs You coMfORt,

Happiness MAKes you haPpy,

Happiness MAkES you murMur.

Happiness TuRnEd peOplE To Love You,

Happiness IS love.

Posted: **Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:52 am**

Happiness makes you happy ???????????? ... er sorry... haPpy

Kinda like:

Sadness makes you sAd

Why would happiness make you whisper??? It might want to make you shout???

And why would it talke comManD????

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Posted: **Wed Dec 23, 2009 4:03 am**

The Beautiful poem about Happiness...

By who's criteria?:-3

Posted: **Wed Dec 23, 2009 11:17 pm**

It doesn't really make sense without the missing six lines:

HapPiNess Is HonEstY,

HappIneSs FOrm PeAce.

HappIneSs IS What we’re waiTiNg,

HappInEss Is DeeP DoWn InSide,

HappInESs Is GOnNa save Us,

hapPineSs Might jUst heLp Me FiNd True Love.

To be honest it doesn't make sense without the correct punctuation too, and you've rather mucked that with your transcription.

The original's one of the 22 poems by jade MOnteScLArOS published at http://www.poemhunter.com/ebooks/redir. ... 2009_2.pdf