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Two Short Poems

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 9:01 pm
by Little U.S Dreamer
My favorite poets are Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Edgar Allen Poe, Lewis Carroll, and more.

Who is/are yours?

"Never did the world know me

Never did it care

Never did it answer my scream

Or even take a look

Never did it talk to me

Or tell me who to blame

Never did it matter

Because we were all the same. "

"If only I could drink the world

It would taste like strawberry wine

All Concords and memories, a sinful mix of time

All those supple little tingles

How I would savor every burst

Oh moments can’t you share

The realization of the sublime"

I don't claim talent... I twiddle - Constructive critiquing appreciated.

Two Short Poems

Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 3:55 pm
by chonsigirl
I like the second one the best, it flows from the thought of wine and memories, to what could have been.

Two Short Poems

Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 10:52 pm
by Little U.S Dreamer
Thanks, that was rather poetic of yourself to phase it like that. :D