Us Two
Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 10:46 pm
Pinky;840427 wrote: Washed forever with blue
Overcoated with grey
Sombre is the hue
That my soul portrays
For those that look deeper
Than the merry façade
That has no keeper
Bitter and hard.
A heart so warped
That it cannot feel
An iceberg personified
Krypton wrapped in steel.
I’d die a thousand deaths
Just to let you in
Submit a thousand breaths
To vanquish all my sin
Just to be with you,
Just us two.
hi pinky ...
this is a quite beautiful piece of prose ... it portrays a feeling of such longing for love and the understanding that despite this person's heart being warped ... unfeeling and cold ... they would die a thousand times just to be with the one they love!
Overcoated with grey
Sombre is the hue
That my soul portrays
For those that look deeper
Than the merry façade
That has no keeper
Bitter and hard.
A heart so warped
That it cannot feel
An iceberg personified
Krypton wrapped in steel.
I’d die a thousand deaths
Just to let you in
Submit a thousand breaths
To vanquish all my sin
Just to be with you,
Just us two.
hi pinky ...
this is a quite beautiful piece of prose ... it portrays a feeling of such longing for love and the understanding that despite this person's heart being warped ... unfeeling and cold ... they would die a thousand times just to be with the one they love!