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Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 7:49 am**

I buried you today

Now it's time to walk away

And leave this all behind.

A life that once held Sushine

Is black and full of hate

As I buried you today.

I took everything you once gave me

And I put them in the grave

When I buried you today.

Every memory, every picture

Everything that was you

I put in a box and I buried

That box with you.

"Yes"

I buried you today.

Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:16 pm**

How sad. :-1

Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:24 pm**

"Thanks for the reply".

This is about letting go and moving on

After a bad relationship.

It actually was like a weight being lifted off me.

Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:38 pm**

Sad words that say so much and ones that so many of us can relate to............so moving Debo and hope your pain will become abit easier for you every day.Love indeed can hurt as the song tells us.

Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:34 pm**

Debo;838147 wrote: "Thanks for the reply".

This is about letting go and moving on

After a bad relationship.

It actually was like a weight being lifted off me.
Best wishes Debo,

Here's to the future.

Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:36 pm**

Good poem. The second stanza bother's me, though. I hope your life now is not "black and full of hate." Make it "bright and full of hope", my friend.

Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:22 pm**

So long as you write this kind of crap and sit there wiping tears away as you do it... nothing got buried today. Nothing is gone. The loser just took another moment from you.

I'm a great believer in revenge. And the best revenge in a situation like this is being so happy that the loser has no option but to spend the rest of his/her/its life wondering just WTF he/she/it was thinking to let you slip away...

Now, you may have to 'fake' it for a little bit... that's only natural, ya know? But at some point you'll come to the startling realization that you are no longer 'faking' it. That's the sweet moment... that moment that you just don't care, you have more important things to think about.

Posted: **Tue Apr 15, 2008 10:42 pm**

flopstock;838376 wrote: So long as you write this kind of crap and sit there wiping tears away as you do it... nothing got buried today. Nothing is gone. The loser just took another moment from you.

I'm a great believer in revenge. And the best revenge in a situation like this is being so happy that the loser has no option but to spend the rest of his/her/its life wondering just WTF he/she/it was thinking to let you slip away...

Now, you may have to 'fake' it for a little bit... that's only natural, ya know? But at some point you'll come to the startling realization that you are no longer 'faking' it. That's the sweet moment... that moment that you just don't care, you have more important things to think about.

Harsh! I didn't think it was crap, I thought it was quite well written. And if writing about your pain makes it feel a bit better, then it's not a waste of time IMO.

Posted: **Wed Apr 16, 2008 1:29 am**

Thanks to each of you for your replys to my post.

Flopstock

Oh I wasn't sheding any tears when i wrote this

I was drinking a glass of wine thinking

Free I'm Free at last.