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Sway the night away

Request 2 for RG. It works off of the request I did for devist8me. Two sides of one story.

I probably shouldn’t write while I listen to Coltrane and Miles. I will post the complete lyrics, and the quote that RG requested a story on. I also don't put these stories up just to share my head with the world, something reciprical; like feedback is appreciated.

[you snooze you lose... post edited to allow for submission to a publisher]

That was fab, KB!!!

I love it!!

You don't know it, but you even put a few things about me in there. I really enjoyed this. Thank you! :-6

Had to come back and say thanks again-

I've read it about five times so far. :-6

almostfamous;633559 wrote: Another winner :-6



She should've attended the funeral with him though. That would've been a twist. Maybe he'd still be alive?


She was dead, she was there, I just didn't get into it that much.

almostfamous;633563 wrote: The wife went with him to muse's funeral? Just clarifying the she's..


Umm the wife was in devist8me's story, that was the story from the woman that died. No you are getting me confused, see what happens when you wait to read?

Now you got me all worried about my nouns and pronouns, I hate using names in the stories.