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Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:24 am
by SuzyB
Just wanted to share with you guys a poem that my 10 year old daughter wrote.
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Breathe on me, breath of God,
Fill me with the Holy Spirit,
That I forgive everyone who sins,
And love everyone you do.
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Breathe on me, breath of God,
Fill me with love,
Until my love runs out,
And if I do this, God will love me, like he loves you
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By Jenna aged 10
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:27 am
by WonderWendy3
Absolutely Wonderful!! Very impressive!! I love it, thank you for sharing!!
Bless you sweet Jenna!!:-4 :-4
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:31 am
by SuzyB
I'll have to find some other pieces she has done, she had mass today and read that poem out, I am so proud of her, Jenna is dyslexic, so learns her words off by heart so she doesn't have to read from cards.
I just had a phone call with her Drama Exam results, she got a merit, 2nd highest :-6
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:31 am
by SuzyB
Idgie;631957 wrote: This was beautiful SuzyB! :-4
Thank you, that was Jennas hard work :-6
Love the avatar piccy :-6
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:34 am
by WonderWendy3
SuzyB;631963 wrote: I'll have to find some other pieces she has done, she had mass today and read that poem out, I am so proud of her, Jenna is dyslexic, so learns her words off by heart so she doesn't have to read from cards.
I just had a phone call with her Drama Exam results, she got a merit, 2nd highest :-6
awww, how wonderful! I'm so happy for you, I know you are proud!! :-4 :-6
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:35 am
by sunny104
that's beautiful, she definitely has talent! :-6
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 9:39 am
by zinkyusa
Wow, from the mouths of babes
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 10:58 am
by SuzyB
sunny104;631966 wrote: that's beautiful, she definitely has talent! :-6
zinkyusa;631967 wrote: Wow, from the mouths of babes
AngelEyes82;632004 wrote: wow Suzy you have a talented daughter!!
:-4
Thanks guys :-4
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:20 pm
by beautyful
that was so nice :-4 you must be so proud of her
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:53 pm
by G-man
Wow. Ten years old? That's very beautiful. You must be so excited at your daughter's brilliance.
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:05 pm
by along-for-the-ride
Lovely!
That young lady of yours has talent.
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 2:08 pm
by pinkchick
Suzy - that is so beautiful. Bless Jenna's little heart
:-4 :-4
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 6:56 pm
by Ted
SuzyB:-6
Excellent piece of work. May she never lose her creativity. It is far to precious and few manage to maintain it.
Shalom
Ted:-6
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 4:26 am
by kazalala
Your daughter sounds like a wonderful person already:-6 :-4
Breathe on me, breath of God.
Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 8:23 am
by SuzyB
beautyful;632104 wrote: that was so nice you must be so proud of her
magenta flame;632226 wrote: Gee suze she must have a very dear heart, that daughter of yours.
Congradulations ! there's something special there:)
G-man;632231 wrote: Wow. Ten years old? That's very beautiful. You must be so excited at your daughter's brilliance.
along-for-the-ride;632241 wrote: Lovely!
That young lady of yours has talent.
pinkchick;632247 wrote: Suzy - that is so beautiful. Bless Jenna's little heart
Pinky;632350 wrote: That's brill...she should keep writing!
Far Rider;632421 wrote: Takes my breath away thats for sure! Well done Jenna!
Ted;632509 wrote: SuzyB
Excellent piece of work. May she never lose her creativity. It is far to precious and few manage to maintain it.
Shalom
Ted
kazalala;632711 wrote: Your daughter sounds like a wonderful person already
Thank you guys , Jenna has written quite a lot of poems, but she isn't very confident with her dyslexia, but I am going to show her all these replies and I know she will be made up :-4 :-4