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Dreams
Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 6:42 pm
by WonderWendy3
Beautiful as usual!! Awesome!!
Dreams
Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 6:45 pm
by chonsigirl
Oh, PInky, this is so good!:)
Dreams
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 4:18 am
by Tater Tazz
Beautiful poem!
Dreams
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 4:28 am
by pinkchick
Pinky;611179 wrote: The moment of conclusion
ultimate retribution
Exploding the past
Imploding my heart
Drifting on clouds
of dreams unfulfilled
Thoughts and dreams
ever unexpressed
The forgotten moment
forgotten chance
I long for the past
the dreaming expanse
the shadows cast
will forever last
in my reality
so unfortunately.
Bring me dreams of hope
hold me now, hold me fast
Smother me in love
erase my past
My dreams hold only you
A longing too
hard to fight
only fulfilled at night
the dreams I hold
beautiful and bold.
Love it:-4
Dreams
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 6:56 am
by Mia
Pinky being new to the group this is a side of you I had not seen. You are very talented,that is so beautiful
Dreams
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 7:24 am
by Pheasy
Have you ever published any of your poems? They are excellent and really heart moving. :-4 :-4