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koan wrote:

This is the part I'm curious about. How did you receive "the seal"? How did you get to the afterlife? Was this a near death experience? Were you meditating? Were you watching The Matrix and suddenly a reflection from Laurence Fishbourne's glasses shone enlightenment through the windows of your soul?

Short form: At what point did you realise you had been in the afterlife and what signs made you believe it was true?


I visited afterlife world when I was 13 years old. I rided on my bicycle down from mountain. When my bicycle had the speed approx 40km/hour then leading wheel of my bicycle was damaged due problem with fork of bicycle. I bored the ground by my head and became dead. After that I had meeting with the beast in afterlife world. After receiving the seal of beast I was returned back into this world.

I never watched MATRIX. My article says that model of this world is roughly similar to model of world which was displayed in Matrix movie.

I believe that I visited afterlife world same as you are believing that you are living in this world! I can't prove that through the internet but any clairvoyant can watch the mark of beast on my left cheek.

Sorry! Emglish is not my native language

nickols_k wrote: I visited afterlife world when I was 13 years old. I rided on my bicycle down from mountain. When my bicycle had the speed approx 40km/hour then leading wheel of my bicycle was damaged due problem with fork of bicycle. I bored the ground by my head and became dead. After that I had meeting with the beast in afterlife world. After receiving the seal of beast I was returned back into this world.

I never watched MATRIX. My article says that model of this world is roughly similar to model of world which was displayed in Matrix movie.

I believe that I visited afterlife world same as you are believing that you are living in this world! I can't prove that through the internet but any clairvoyant can watch the mark of beast on my left cheek.

Sorry! Emglish is not my native language


Thank you. It sounded as though you had a near death experience and pointing that out helps your case for having something to say which others can not have experienced. I would appreciate hearing directly from you how you recall the mark being placed on your face. And, also, what it means to you and why.

Asking members to read the entire web article saves you time but is unlikely to happen. It is a very long article...even with an index.

koan wrote: Thank you. It sounded as though you had a near death experience and pointing that out helps your case for having something to say which others can not have experienced. I would appreciate hearing directly from you how you recall the mark being placed on your face. And, also, what it means to you and why.


That means that I'm saved anyway! Same as anyone who will receive the seal not on forehead or not on hand! Total number of such men will be 60. Other 606 will be saved with the seal of beast on forehead or on hand.



Asking members to read the entire web article saves you time but is unlikely to happen. It is a very long article...even with an index.
Russian version of article in 3 times longer

nickols_k wrote: That means that I'm saved anyway! Same as anyone who will receive the seal not on forehead or not on hand! Total number of such men will be 60. Other 606 will be saved with the seal of beast on forehead or on hand.

Russian version of article in 3 times longer


Let me mention that I appreciate your ability to speak more than one language. I would not do half as well trying to communicate in Russian.

Jumping in with deep messages that you wish to share will not be as successful as describing your experiences of transcendence first. If you manage to enthrall us with the tale of how you came to be special we will be more receptive. I'd like to hear in detail about your journey to the afterlife.

koan wrote: Let me mention that I appreciate your ability to speak more than one language. I would not do half as well trying to communicate in Russian.

Jumping in with deep messages that you wish to share will not be as successful as describing your experiences of transcendence first. If you manage to enthrall us with the tale of how you came to be special we will be more receptive. I'd like to hear in detail about your journey to the afterlife.
It seems that you are saturated with false-theories! I have no plans to enthral you and anybody! I tried to write my article with love.

Be bless!

nickols_k wrote: It seems that you are saturated with false-theories! I have no plans to enthral you and anybody! I tried to write my article with love.

Be bless!


Stand corrected. I am well aware that you have no plans to enthrall us. It is my helpful suggestion to you. I do assume, since you posted a thread, that you wish to engage people. One can only hope that you wish to engage people in a constructive manner.

First you must win your audience. A book that starts out poorly will not get the browser to buy it. You must grab our attention first.

your translator may be mishandling the word "enthrall". here it means "bring interest" mixed with "catch our attention"

koan wrote: Stand corrected. I am well aware that you have no plans to enthrall us. It is my helpful suggestion to you. I do assume, since you posted a thread, that you wish to engage people. One can only hope that you wish to engage people in a constructive manner.

First you must win your audience. A book that starts out poorly will not get the browser to buy it. You must grab our attention first.

your translator may be mishandling the word "enthrall". here it means "bring interest" mixed with "catch our attention"
I would be glad if you suggest me how to improbe Preface of my article!

I may add something about darknees like black fog in place where is located the beast!

I may add something about my entering the afterlife world.

Please, any ideas also!!!

nickols_k wrote: I would be glad if you suggest me how to improbe Preface of my article!

I may add something about darknees like black fog in place where is located the beast!

I may add something about my entering the afterlife world.

Please, any ideas also!!!


Your preface should prepare the reader for what you have to say. In this case you want to explain your qualifications. If you begin with something along the lines of:

At the age of thirteen I was thrown into another world by a fateful accident. Clinically pronounced dead, I returned from the afterlife with knowledge rarely glimpsed by the average person. This experience has defined my life as a person with each foot in a different world. Explaining the afterlife to those who have not had a near death experience requires breaking down the illusions that most people hold of what they call "reality". I hope that my experiences can enlighten others while allowing me to share my insights with my fellow humans.



That's just off the top of my head, but do you see how you are drawing your audience in with that type of approach? You extend an invitation and state your intentions, which puts people at ease and makes them more curious.

Also, keep in mind that you are telling people something they are not likely to believe. It is your job to convince them and it is best done by slowly expanding ideas instead of jumping right in.

koan wrote: Also, keep in mind that you are telling people something they are not likely to believe. It is your job to convince them and it is best done by slowly expanding ideas instead of jumping right in.
I agree that me article breaks some bibical notions about the world! Russian version of my article breaks several biblical theories and proves that bible contain false-theories and

many many parts were wrongly translated! I found out wrong translations in english bible same as in russian bible. English version of my article much more softer against of russian one. But I found out that english's forums visit and moderate much more scribes than russian one. On many forumes my subscrition was rejected only for the fact that i don't believe that God-Father Jesus and Holy Spirit are same person. Well, let God-Father judge them!

What do you think about inserting some pictures into my article?

Example:

Hebrews 1:13

But to which of the angels said he at any time, Sit on my right hand, until I make thine enemies thy footstool? Are they not all ministering spirits, sent forth to minister for them who shall be heirs of salvation?

Please believe me that angels are not spirits! Angels are visible and have body same as men. Any man have possibility to touch them by hands.

In prophecy i was informed that God-Father hates us!

When God-Father behave Yourself as God then He is love and is truth but even in this case He hates us! God-father behaves Yourself as God only with those who knows He as God!

How to explain such simplest things for the masses?

nickols_k wrote:

How to explain such simplest things for the masses?


That is the trick. Your article is written for people who already know what you are talking about. If you write it in a way that presumes you need to explain everything then it makes it easier to read. If you jump in to the specifics of your theories then you are saying you are an expert and need to state your qualifications.

Your only special qualifications, that I've heard of so far, are that you have had a near death experience. If you approach it that way then you must try not to talk like a scholar and speak to the common person.

I, for example, have very little clue what you are talking about because I think most people's ideas about God and the Devil are hogwash and lose interest very quickly. As a writer, I see where you lose me but that doesn't mean your story should not be told.

Btw, could you suggest me other forums like this without religious fans and

cataloges and may be some other internet resources for advertising of my article?

Be bless!

nickols_k wrote: Btw, could you suggest me other forums like this without religious fans and

cataloges and may be some other internet resources for advertising of my article?

Be bless!


I'm not a marketing specialist. If advertising is what you wish then type in "internet advertising" in a google search and you will get lots of advice.

If discussion is what you wish then you should stick with one forum until you've perfected it.

koan wrote: I'm not a marketing specialist. If advertising is what you wish then type in "internet advertising" in a google search and you will get lots of advice.

If discussion is what you wish then you should stick with one forum until you've perfected it.
I guessed that you are surfer of religious forums!

About perfection of my article! Unfortunatedly I have no time to make it excellent book because God-Father limited the period to bear the fruit worthy of my repention!

If there is urgency about your mission then you might try approaching church officials and explaining to them what parts they have wrong and convince them of the urgency. They have a pretty good method of spreading the word. They could send out a memo or something. Faxes...emails...

Or is there some reason to think that they are not also inspired by God? Surely they will recognise that you carry an important message regarding their salvation.

nickols_k wrote: About perfection of my article! Unfortunatedly I have no time to make it excellent book because God-Father limited the period to bear the fruit worthy of my repention!The story of Walter Miller on http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Disappointment is an interesting comparison to your own expectations. Walter Miller is long dead, but the churches he inspired now have about 14 million members all of whom are still waiting daily for the End Time to arrive. Perhaps you have longer in which to work than the limited period you speak of.

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koan wrote: If there is urgency about your mission then you might try approaching church officials and explaining to them what parts they have wrong and convince them of the urgency. They have a pretty good method of spreading the word. They could send out a memo or something. Faxes...emails...

Or is there some reason to think that they are not also inspired by God? Surely they will recognise that you carry an important message regarding their salvation.
I many many times had received the answer like:

Your article disagree to bible

So it's no way!

nickols_k wrote: I many many times had received the answer like:

Your article disagree to bible

So it's no way!
Why do you think they aren't open to correction?

koan wrote: Why do you think they aren't open to correction?
They guess that Bible says nothing about the beast in afterlife world then my article is false-theory!

I'd say that half the people reading this thread will think that you are claiming to be The Beast and half will think that you are claiming to be a messenger of God. This is the first thing that you need to make clear.

You mention that psychics have confirmed that you bear the mark of the beast. How many psychics have seen it on you?

koan:-6

Some excellent advice. I also admire your patience. Well done.

nick:-6

English may not be your native language but you are not doing too badly. I could do absolutely nothing in Russian. French, Greek and Hebrew some.

Shalom

Ted:-6

Nicolas, I had a look at your site since I was giving you loads earlier so I thought it only fair. I must say that after reading your interpretation of revealtions, christianity, I am of the opinion that you suffered some sort of mental trauma during your near-death experience that your subconciouness has turned into a religious experience. Its interesting that as an Orthodox Christian (which is what I am presuming you are, since you are a Russian), almost all of the imagery and symobilism you discuss is direclty relatied to the bible and the ideas you were brought up with as a child. You have your own interpretation of them of course, but nothing seems to be said of the 4 billion who are not christians. Also, a lot of your facts about this world being one of many, and the next kingdom of Christ coming in 50 years, and your mixing up of religious iconography with modrn technology shows that you are somewhat confused. I also of course don't believe any of it, but thats just me.

Galbally wrote: Nicolas, I had a look at your site since I was giving you loads earlier so I thought it only fair. I must say that after reading your interpretation of revealtions, christianity, I am of the opinion that you suffered some sort of mental trauma during your near-death experience that your subconciouness has turned into a religious experience. Its interesting that as an Orthodox Christian (which is what I am presuming you are, since you are a Russian),


Orthodox Christian is dominant religion in Russia but not only relion!

Same as Catolic's church not only religion in europe!

I agree with you about that I'm living witness of the beast in afterlife world!

I'm not only witness. The people with the seal of beast on forehead approx 50 in my city! And I fear to say about the Earth



almost all of the imagery and symobilism you discuss is direclty relatied to the bible and the ideas you were brought up with as a child. You have your own interpretation of them of course, but nothing seems to be said of the 4 billion who are not christians. Also, a lot of your facts about this world being one of many, and the next kingdom of Christ coming in 50 years, and your mixing up of religious iconography with modrn technology shows that you are somewhat confused. I also of course don't believe any of it, but thats just me.
Jesus Christ during the time when He preached on the Earth did attract approx several hundreds followers only! The question of faith is always most complex question!

nickols_k wrote: Orthodox Christian is dominant religion in Russia but not only relion!

Same as Catolic's church not only religion in europe!

I agree with you about that I'm living witness of the beast in afterlife world!

I'm not only witness. The people with the seal of beast on forehead approx 50 in my city! And I fear to say about the Earth

Jesus Christ during the time when He preached on the Earth did attract approx several hundreds followers only! The question of faith is always most complex question!


I don't mean to belittle your experience or rubbish your ideas, but I'm not a religious person (just another lapsed Catholic) so I just don't go in for things of this nature. I would advise that you keep an open mind on what has happened to you, as it may not have a divine aspect to it, but just may be something you experienced as a result of trauma, of course you are perfectly entitled to make of your experiences what you will, and your English for a non-fluent speaker is quite good, a lot better than my Russian, and consiering you are having to use the Latin alphabet, very good.

koan wrote: I'd say that half the people reading this thread will think that you are claiming to be The Beast and half will think that you are claiming to be a messenger of God. This is the first thing that you need to make clear.

You mention that psychics have confirmed that you bear the mark of the beast. How many psychics have seen it on you?
Btw, what do you think about adding this into my article:

I visited the afterlife world approx when was 13 years old. It was begun when I did ride on bicycle. When I come down from hill and this bicycle had the speed approx. 30-40 km/hour then leading wheel outstrip the bicycle due problems with bicycle's fork. After that I bored the ground by my head. The ground has the density same as density of asphalt. That was earthenware rural road. I did not remember any pain after nock same as everyman who become die in auto catastrophes. Moreover, after transferring into afterlife world all people lose any pain of their bodies. When I raise my head darkness was only thing what I may watch around me. This darkness looks like black fog. It's possible to say that within of this gloom was impossible to watch out something. The beast is only who rambles in that black fog. The beast was badly studied by me because there was poor illumination. Only thing that I remember is gigantic size of the beast. The beast was with mask on mug. This mask was precision copy of my further face. Such face I had when was 25 years old. The beast had the same clothes which I did wear 10 years later since the moment of visiting the afterlife world. As I understand, the beast meets a few people with mask on mug. The beast did snarl and his snarl sounded like boom of thunders but without of noise of many waters. When beast tramp the ground by rear paw then it caused light earthquake.

I was tossed up for half meter. I would say that my monologue was pressed out

from me as by piston. As I understand, there was absolute will of Creator about me to have the seal of beast. The beast fight me by right paw. Since that time I have the seal of beast on left cheek. Right after that God-Father said me what I will have for mark of beast on my left cheek. In the next moment of time I was anticipated from gloom and was raised on 50-100 meters up. I watched Road to Heaven. I watched that on that Road were people which pointed me to side of Kingdom of Heaven by hands and tried to say me something. But there was too big distance between us and I can't hear them. The Road where did stand the people looks like composite of clay and sand which was strongly illuminated by something like light of sun. This road rather have yellow than brown color and I would say - tawny color. I saw the Kingdom of Heaven which looks like the cloud shining by white light from inside. After that I was rised into our world. When I opened my eyes then I see that my body was like cotton wool. I feel that myself because my body had temperature around 20 degrees of celsius. I did feel that I'm breathing with smell of naphthalene. My face was as face of Terminator when half of face was cuted off and instead of skin there was crust of blood. When I was in afterlife world then my dead body was examined one man who accidentally was a witness of catastrophe. As I understand during the period when I was dead, I had fracture of necked vertebra and bite language. After rising from afterlife world I had no these damages. Only question which had accidental witness was: "Are you sign contract in afterlife?" After examining of bicycle we have found that leading wheel had form of digit 8. The frame of bicycle was whacked. Several minutes later, I did repent in the fact that I caused anger of God-Father. But perfectly other story has begin here. It's the story of my life after receiving the seal of beast.

nickols_k wrote: Btw, what do you think about adding this into my article:




I think that is a much better way of getting an audience. I suggest to you that you tell the story of your afterlife experience before you try to spread the messages you have written about. When people get to know you and your experience first they will be able to pay more attention to what you are saying.

I also think you should keep the final story in Russian and get someone more experienced in English to translate it for you, if you think it needs to be in English as well.

I do think that telling the complete story of your death and your return from the afterlife will be very helpful for you and you'll find that many more people will be interested in reading about it than about the Beast. Near death experiences fascinate a lot of people. If you can get an audience that way then you might be able to get an audience for other work. Keep in mind with your article on the Beast that hundreds of people have already written that they are messengers from God. They believe it just as much as you do. I doubt you'll be taken seriously. It is likely more a message for you than for the rest of the world. Regardless, your story about your journey to the afterlife and how it has affected you since then is amazing. I'd like to hear more. Turn it into a complete story of its own.

koan wrote: I think that is a much better way of getting an audience. I suggest to you that you tell the story of your afterlife experience before you try to spread the messages you have written about. When people get to know you and your experience first they will be able to pay more attention to what you are saying.

I also think you should keep the final story in Russian and get someone more experienced in English to translate it for you, if you think it needs to be in English as well.

I do think that telling the complete story of your death and your return from the afterlife will be very helpful for you and you'll find that many more people will be interested in reading about it than about the Beast. Near death experiences fascinate a lot of people. If you can get an audience that way then you might be able to get an audience for other work. Keep in mind with your article on the Beast that hundreds of people have already written that they are messengers from God. They believe it just as much as you do. I doubt you'll be taken seriously. It is likely more a message for you than for the rest of the world. Regardless, your story about your journey to the afterlife and how it has affected you since then is amazing. I'd like to hear more. Turn it into a complete story of its own.
In Russian this story is in 3 times longer

nickols_k wrote: In Russian this story is in 3 times longer


Again, I think you should separate the two stories and tell about your accident first.

I've published next version were added short description of my visit the afterlife!

koan wrote: Again, I think you should separate the two stories and tell about your accident first.
Thanks! Do you have any other ideas about how to attract large audience to my article?

nickols_k;440051 wrote: Thanks! Do you have any other ideas about how to attract large audience to my article?


Yeah tell us about your life in Russia and what you think of everything thats happening there, thats interesting, leave off on the apocalypse stuff for a while, I'd love to hear what your life is like in your part of Russia.

Galbally;440832 wrote: Yeah tell us about your life in Russia and what you think of everything thats happening there, thats interesting, leave off on the apocalypse stuff for a while, I'd love to hear what your life is like in your part of Russia.


My life is very ordinal life. I'm working 8 hour / day. Then I spend almost all free time for internet to advertise my article! During last 2 years I'm far from politics and culture life of Russia. My life today differs from my life 3 year ago because I had Highest Judgement from God-Father in december 2004. This Judgement has defined my life as a person

with shifted top for a first half-year of living after Highest Judgement. Right for now I'm waiting for coming the one event which should orefectly change my life. But this events depends on resolution of Highest Judgement and on popularity of my article!

Any other questions or suggestions?

Have you figured out what you'll do if your article is not popular?

nickols_k;441000 wrote: My life is very ordinal life. I'm working 8 hour / day. Then I spend almost all free time for internet to advertise my article! During last 2 years I'm far from politics and culture life of Russia. My life today differs from my life 3 year ago because I had Highest Judgement from God-Father in december 2004. This Judgement has defined my life as a person

with shifted top for a first half-year of living after Highest Judgement. Right for now I'm waiting for coming the one event which should orefectly change my life. But this events depends on resolution of Highest Judgement and on popularity of my article!

Any other questions or suggestions?


Yeah, what part of Russia do you like in?, I think you said Kazan, is that in western Russia or is it on the eastern side of the Urals? What is the landscape like where you live?, how cold does it get in the winter? Have you ever heard about Ireland where I live?, what do you imagine its like? I understand that you are very religiously motivated at the moment, but we don't get many Russians posting here and I am really interested in your country and what life is like there, its OK if you'd rather just stick to your own topic, but I'd appreciate it if you talk a bit about your country.

koan wrote:

Have you figured out what you'll do if your article is not popular?


If my article will not be popular then I will have too heavy Highest Judgement which will be happened within the next half year and maybe in december of 2006!

Galbally;441602 wrote: Yeah, what part of Russia do you like in?, I think you said Kazan, is that in western Russia or is it on the eastern side of the Urals? What is the landscape like where you live?, how cold does it get in the winter? Have you ever heard about Ireland where I live?, what do you imagine its like?


Kazan is city where I'm living since birthday! Kazan is capital of Tatarstan which is province of Russia! Landscape of Tatarstan is low hills and fields with little rivers. Tatarstan is foothiils of Ural's mountains! Lowest temperasture during winter is -54 degrees by celsius. I know location of Ierland on globe.



I understand that you are very religiously motivated at the moment, but we don't get many Russians posting here and I am really interested in your country and what life is like there, its OK if you'd rather just stick to your own topic, but I'd appreciate it if you talk a bit about your country.
I'm not very religious but I was forced into fruits of repention by God-Father!!! I can to perform postings in Russian if this forum contains somebody who will iread them!

I hope that disscussing about Russia could be moved into private correspondense!

nickols_k;442074 wrote: If my article will not be popular then I will have too heavy Highest Judgement which will be happened within the next half year and maybe in december of 2006!

Kazan is city where I'm living since birthday! Kazan is capital of Tatarstan which is province of Russia! Landscape of Tatarstan is low hills and fields with little rivers. Tatarstan is foothiils of Ural's mountains! Lowest temperasture during winter is -54 degrees by celsius. I know location of Ierland on globe.

I'm not very religious but I was forced into fruits of repention by God-Father!!! I can to perform postings in Russian if this forum contains somebody who will iread them!

I hope that disscussing about Russia could be moved into private correspondense!


Thank you Nickolas, thats was interesting to hear, I will look for Tartarstan on the atlas, and I wish you well on your religious quest.

Galbally:-6

I agree. I too, found that interesting.

Shalom

Ted:-6

JUST FOR FUNS. This is far similar to the beast in afterlife:

Peace to you!

I've published new 1.04 version of my article which contains new information about previous creations (full ChangeLog is located at bottom of file).

If someone has troubles with understanding of my english then please notify me!

Be bless!

Well I've published v 1.05 of my article with proofreading! Hope it will be much clear to understand!

nickols_k;457930 wrote: Well I've published v 1.05 of my article with proofreading! Hope it will be much clear to understand!


Важно, что Вы любите вашу книгу. Если Вы любите вашу книгу, чем Вы сделали большую работу.

koan;458911 wrote: Важно, что Вы любите вашу книгу. Если Вы любите вашу книгу, чем Вы сделали большую работу.


Is it hint on my english or what? I don't understand this phrase! Would it be possible in english please?

nickols_k;458985 wrote: Is it hint on my english or what? I don't understand this phrase! Would it be possible in english please?


darn. I was trying to write back in russian but the translator must not have worked. It was just to see if I could do it.

In english: It is important, that you love your book. If you love your book then you did great work.

i want to know why it didn't work.

I'll try a different translator:

Это важно, что Вы любите вашу книгу. Если Вы любите вашу книгу, чем Вы сделали большую работу.



is that the same? better? worse?



eta: I just looked and two translators did exactly the same thing. :yh_think

You do speak Russian, right?

koan;459013 wrote: i want to know why it didn't work.

I'll try a different translator:

Это важно, что Вы любите вашу книгу. Если Вы любите вашу книгу, чем Вы сделали большую работу.



is that the same? better? worse?



eta: I just looked and two translators did exactly the same thing. :yh_think
It's exactly the same! There is no difference!



You do speak Russian, right?


Yes!!!

nickols_k;459034 wrote: It's exactly the same! There is no difference!



Yes!!!


then find me an english/russian translation tool that prints something you can read.

wait, i know. You write something in Russian and I'll try to tell you what it means.

koan;459046 wrote: then find me an english/russian translation tool that prints something you can read.

wait, i know. You write something in Russian and I'll try to tell you what it means.
I can read your text! This text has bad grammatics! I tried many online translator and every translates with bad results!

Why you don't want to use english?