To Mary Jean (For Re-making my World)

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polycarp
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Fair Mary Jean,

(i)

Thou art

Cool yet not taciturn

Benign and not frenzy

Wary but not subtle

And the fairest of them all

What more about a dame could be asked?

(ii)

Like a gazelle’s

Are your curvatures

Like a springtide rose

Your mild smile

With such a soothing temperance

Unleash you all day

Bundles of sweetness

(iii)

Your palpable beauty radiates

Like light from the sun

Your voice soothes

Like the orchestration of Beethoven

While the sight of your svelte shape

Catapults a mind to the zenith of bliss

And self actualization

(iv)

When you walk the streets

Around you dwells an aura of pleasantness

That sparks a universal appeal

Whose magnetic effects

Always makes you like a goldfish

Who has no hiding place

(iv)

Across pleasant leas

In the heart of paradise

Dwell I amidst meanings sublime

When I close my eyes to picture you

(v)

In the final analysis

Be thou informed

That this world and its host of wares

Are but like a farmland filled with tares

Without a special person like you

To make them real

(vi)

Mary Jean my princess

You’re sure more than not

The peak of reasonable conception

Of natural beauty at its best

And you’ll ever remain

Not just a source of inspiration

But a fountain of cascading blessings.
A formula for tact: "Be brief politely, be aggressive smilingly, be emphatic pleasantly, be positive diplomatically, be right graciously".
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Poly, how lovely.

Something tells me you're in love! :-4
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You’re quite right abbey, I am swimming in the pleasant pool of love. Mary Jean has transformed me to a new person who has learned to appreciate the wonderful feeling of loving someone. I feel her love right through the bone marrow and feel so energized that I can climb mount Everest or swim across the Atlantic. Thanks again abbey, hey it’s time to go and give Mary Jean a call. I’m off
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Poly, how lucky tou are!

Nothing can beat that first flush of new found love,

the way your tummy flips a somersault when you hear their voice.

Well done hon, and i wish you much happiness X
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Thanks abbey for those kind and encouraging words. If I may ask what's your story? Were you, are you or are you looking forward to, being in love?
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polycarp wrote: Thanks abbey for those kind and encouraging words. If I may ask what's your story? Were you, are you or are you looking forward to, being in love?I've been with my boyfriend for just over 3 years now, so i'm well past the first flush of undying love stage now.

I'm more at the comfy, so you dont mind if you fart stage! :wah:

not that i do, i'm too much of a lady! :o
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That's good to know abbey, wow three years is quite some time. You are right, it occurs in stages but its good to enjoy every stage to the fullest. Jean and I are months in the game and hope to get married next year. Something tells me that your boy friend is very lucky to have you. Thanks and good luck.
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