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Lady J
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Love defies anything,

No conditions.

Love reigns with its inner feelings

and intuition.

It will often lead us down a path

Rocky in places, grassy in others,

But will always give us a place to rest.

To take a deep breath.

Eyes opened wide and realize

We are blessed.

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Really good stuff. I dissagree a bit with the message, but it is good poetry and use semirhymes to end your stanzas
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Short and to the point. Good prose.
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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littleCJelkton;1386586 wrote: Really good stuff. I dissagree a bit with the message, but it is good poetry and use semirhymes to end your stanzas


Thank you, littleCJelkton. :yh_smiley
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jones jones;1386590 wrote: Short and to the point. Good prose.


glad you approve!!

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