Another quicky

limitless · Post by **limitless** » Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:34 am

Talking to a friend about wisdom and they tell me im unconventional, take the crash course , but still reach the desired destination - so i said this

bruised and battered,

i get to the gates.

slowly they turn and ogle

their lips spread in a grin

shaking their heads

muttering, giggling,

bruised and battered

i arrive at last

not a bad response written in 2 minutes

Post by **jones jones** » Tue Nov 22, 2011 10:23 am

Flash poetry at its best Lily! Well done. :-6

hewitt12 · Post by **hewitt12** » Mon Nov 28, 2011 4:19 am

That was so nice. Can make such stuff also when I'm in the garden.

Post by **jones jones** » Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:38 am

Well please make stuff cos like I said someplace else ... we have a shortage of poets here. :-6