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Limitless ... One of my rare short pieces.

I want to fly above the rain

Soar up into the night;

I yearn to follow your angelic light

And so never return again

I want to dance to your refrain

Spend my life with you;

I yearn to change my aura’s hue

And so never return again.
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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I like that JJ and I think I can see the meaning.
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It's beautiful!

I love short pieces that are relatable,

It says so much in so little,

I like the fact it isn't linked to a gender and your voice and your want is dominant

Very appreciative! Thank you (:
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oscar;1375576 wrote: I like that JJ and I think I can see the meaning.




Good on you Oscar! I love to fly and I try to do so every night!!
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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Limitless ... Give me a more earthling like name to call you. Thank you so much.
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jones jones;1375652 wrote: Good on you Oscar! I love to fly and I try to do so every night!!


I admire anyone who can write meaningful words and especially when they are few words but sum up so much.

I have no talent whatsoever when It comes to writing.
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how about lily :) and - no worries I enjoyed reading it!
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limitless;1376384 wrote: how about lily :) and - no worries I enjoyed reading it!


Cool! Lily works for me cos I have a very special friend and she's called Lili!
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