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Lady J
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Just like the tortoise

Retracting into its armor

I seek protection,

From your offensive ways.

Much akin to the coiled snake

Resting in the shade of the elm

I will bide my time;

Then hiss out and strike you down.

An ape rises,

Scratches his arm pit

Sniffs the breeze

Snorts, stares

and leaves.



5/27/2011

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I do believe that this could be the best piece of prose you have ever written! I stand in awe at how your writing has improved over the years. Well done! :-6
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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Awe, Baby....my writing has only improved cuz of your guiding hand and knowledge.

Thank You.....:-4

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