Season of Fall

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Lady J
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Season of Fall

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Today was a day to run

through the fading summer’s rays

Into the fields of tall grasses,

Bleached, that pale, ash tone blonde

from the golden rays of the sun.

Nature’s decadent display

Of a glorious dress

Seizes the reds,

Yellows and various hues

Against a canvas of blue.

The chipmunks, squirrels

And wood fairies

Scatter to and fro,

Hiding winter’s endurance

In secret lairs among

The rustle of leaves.

The aura of fall air

Fills your lungs

As the crisp coolness

Gives birth

To a new season.

To settle under a tree,

And become one,

With the sounds

Sights and season of fall;

Until the shadows grow long.

Lady J
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Very pretty poem of the season-the hustle before the deep winter, and the darkness descends on life.
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Post by along-for-the-ride »

I like your poem, Lady J. You expressed well why autumn is my favorite season.

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Ah BooBoo ... You grow in confidence as a writer day by day!
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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Lady J
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Thank you chonsigirl ..I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Along-for-the-ride...I must say I really like your avatar name! So free and open!

And yes...Autumn is a beauty season.

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Post by Lady J »

My Dear J ~ thank you...As you as my guide how can I not write what I feel.

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