Silence grows
Silver streams
Golden groves
Silky dreams.
Darkness knows
A moonlit sigh
Impassioned throes
A starlit eye.
A crystal glows
Revealing where
The path I chose
Is crystal clear.
In the silence
I shall dwell
Think not of heaven
Nor of hell.
And in that centre
Point shall be
A home where you
Can visit me.
In the Silence
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In the Silence
koan wrote: Silence grows
Silver streams
Golden groves
Silky dreams.
Darkness knows
A moonlit sigh
Impassioned throes
A starlit eye.
A crystal glows
Revealing where
The path I chose
Is crystal clear.
In the silence
I shall dwell
Think not of heaven
Nor of hell.
And in that centre
Point shall be
A home where you
Can visit me. Hugs & Kisses Koan
Silver streams
Golden groves
Silky dreams.
Darkness knows
A moonlit sigh
Impassioned throes
A starlit eye.
A crystal glows
Revealing where
The path I chose
Is crystal clear.
In the silence
I shall dwell
Think not of heaven
Nor of hell.
And in that centre
Point shall be
A home where you
Can visit me. Hugs & Kisses Koan
In the Silence
Sweeet. Nice work, koan. Good measure, metaphor, and imagery. 
All the world's a stage and the men and women merely players...Shakespeare
In the Silence
I know this is not going to sound very technical...but wow....pretty...and made me ache a bit.
In the Silence
i thought that was very good work.and quite creative too.
In between the world of dreams,its all just shadows and light