What’s this thing about you

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polycarp
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What’s this thing about you

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Sweet Aminatu

How fascinating your personality.

What’s this thing about you,

That nullifies my sensibility?

What rare flair have you,

Rendering lame my base of rationality?

What depth of mystery,

Constitutes the myth behind your charms?

Evacuating my emotions from an earthly realm,

To one where as princess you reign.

Sweet Aminatu

How exquisite your configuration.

What’s this thing about you

Taking sway on my daily thought?

What striking attribute you possess,

Dominating my nightly dreams?

You sure hold the key

For opening gates to a castle

Where a covert formula is preserved

To unravel the grand secret

Of how my greatest reverie can come true.



Sweet Aminatu

How amiable your demeanour.

What’s this thing about you

That banishes me to a mental wasteland,

Whenever I fail to see you smile

And your voice, I fail to hear?

What magnetic aura surrounds you,

Rendering me frail and hopeless,

Even when you’re gone for a minute

Let more countless hours or days?

Sweet Aminatu

As I end this heart-sourced lines

Bear in your heart’s deepest formations

That you’re loved, treasured and cherished

In ways easier felt than expressed

For reasons not far-fetched
A formula for tact: "Be brief politely, be aggressive smilingly, be emphatic pleasantly, be positive diplomatically, be right graciously".
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Oh, God.:-5:-5
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chonsigirl
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Hi poly! :)
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What an amazing resurrection! It's so nice to see your name pop up again.

I enjoyed reading that, too.
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polycarp
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Hi guys, how nice to be back at the graden. Chonsi Girl, Spot, Carla and the rest, I missed you all a great deal.
A formula for tact: "Be brief politely, be aggressive smilingly, be emphatic pleasantly, be positive diplomatically, be right graciously".
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