this twisted little world

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scenerio
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this twisted little world

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I wonder what would happen

if the world was perfect and nice

If hopes and dreams were bound to the heart

ever so fiercely tight

I wonder what would happen

if everyone got their way

If everyone got what ever they want

with never haveing to pay

but what would happen to thoes of us

the ones who hates the change

and just wanted it to stay the same

we would strike out at them

and in the middle of the fight

we would point are fingers at them to blame

and go home with a smile that night

for this is the perfect world
In between the world of dreams,its all just shadows and light
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babygirl
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this twisted little world

Post by babygirl »

Great poem nice work :-6
Live life to the max as you only get to do it once!! make your dreams come true :-4





devist8me
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this twisted little world

Post by devist8me »

Love this poem. Seems very true!!!
I probably posted that in an ambien trance-soryy
scenerio
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this twisted little world

Post by scenerio »

thank you for your support

i will try harder next time
In between the world of dreams,its all just shadows and light
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