The Rime of the Forum Gardener
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Most of us are familiar with this excerpt from the famous poem "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner" :
"Like one, that on a lonesome road
Doth walk in fear and dread,
And having once turned round walks on,
And turns no more his head;
Because he knows, a frightful fiend
Doth close behind him tread."
Here's my parody:
Like one that on a lonesome night
Doth type with fear and dread
And having typed once, posts on
Submits, and holds his head:
In hopes that someone will
Respond to what he said.
Now let's see if you can find a stanza from a famous poem, copy it, paste it here and submit a Forum Garden parody.
Any one up for the challenge?
"Like one, that on a lonesome road
Doth walk in fear and dread,
And having once turned round walks on,
And turns no more his head;
Because he knows, a frightful fiend
Doth close behind him tread."
Here's my parody:
Like one that on a lonesome night
Doth type with fear and dread
And having typed once, posts on
Submits, and holds his head:
In hopes that someone will
Respond to what he said.
Now let's see if you can find a stanza from a famous poem, copy it, paste it here and submit a Forum Garden parody.
Any one up for the challenge?
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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"Pas ce soir, AFTR"
But I'll have a go tomorrrow if I have the time.
But I'll have a go tomorrrow if I have the time.
The crowd: "Yes! We are all individuals!"
Lone voice: "I'm not."
Lone voice: "I'm not."
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:wah: Nursery rimes count.
THE BIG SHIP SAILS ON THE ALLY-ALLY-OH
The big ship sails on the ally-ally-oh
The ally-ally-oh, the ally-ally-oh
Oh, the big ship sails on the ally-ally-oh
On the last day of September.
The captain said it will never, never do
Never, never do, never, never do
The captain said it will never, never do
On the last day of September.
The big ship sank to the bottom of the sea
The bottom of the sea, the bottom of the sea
The big ship sank to the bottom of the sea
On the last day of September.
We all dip our heads in the deep blue sea
The deep blue sea, the deep blue sea
We all dip our heads in the deep blue sea
On the last day of September.
Parody:
A new thread starts on the Forum Garden page
The Forum Garden page, the Forum Garden page
Oh, a new thread starts on the Forum Garden page
To be read by any member.
Each member said it will never,never do
Never, never do, never, never do
Each member said it will never, never do
To be read by any member.
The new thread sank to the bottom of the page,
The bottom of the page, the bottom of the page,
The new thread sank to the bottom of the page
Not read by any member.
We all scroll down to the bottom of the page,
The bottom of the page, the bottom of the page
We all scroll down to the bottom of the page
Before we can't remember.
THE BIG SHIP SAILS ON THE ALLY-ALLY-OH
The big ship sails on the ally-ally-oh
The ally-ally-oh, the ally-ally-oh
Oh, the big ship sails on the ally-ally-oh
On the last day of September.
The captain said it will never, never do
Never, never do, never, never do
The captain said it will never, never do
On the last day of September.
The big ship sank to the bottom of the sea
The bottom of the sea, the bottom of the sea
The big ship sank to the bottom of the sea
On the last day of September.
We all dip our heads in the deep blue sea
The deep blue sea, the deep blue sea
We all dip our heads in the deep blue sea
On the last day of September.
Parody:
A new thread starts on the Forum Garden page
The Forum Garden page, the Forum Garden page
Oh, a new thread starts on the Forum Garden page
To be read by any member.
Each member said it will never,never do
Never, never do, never, never do
Each member said it will never, never do
To be read by any member.
The new thread sank to the bottom of the page,
The bottom of the page, the bottom of the page,
The new thread sank to the bottom of the page
Not read by any member.
We all scroll down to the bottom of the page,
The bottom of the page, the bottom of the page
We all scroll down to the bottom of the page
Before we can't remember.
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You said so AFTR....
Jack be quick
Jack be fast
Jack jump over the candlestick:wah:
Jack be quick
Jack be fast
Jack jump over the candlestick:wah:
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Song lyrics count too.
This is a song by Tony Bennett (who also shares my birthday)
The loveliness of Paris seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was Rome is of another day
I've been terribly alone and forgotten in Manhattan
I'm going home to my city by the Bay
I left my heart in San Francisco
High on a hill, it calls to me
To be where little cable cars climb halfway to the stars
The morning fog may chill the air, I don't care
My love waits there in San Francisco
Above the blue and windy sea
When I come home to you, San Francisco
Your golden sun will shine for me
My parody:
The music from the CD seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was TV is of another day
I'm not restless or alone or for granted in my world,
I'm coming here to the Garden anyway.
I leave my thoughts at Forum Garden
Right on this page, it calls to me.
To be here with all the friends who share many thoughts as well
The time may pass around me, but I find I don't care.
A post waits here at Forum Garden
Amongst the threads that I can see.
Where I come here to you, Forum Garden
My friends all smile and welcome me.
:-6
This is a song by Tony Bennett (who also shares my birthday)
The loveliness of Paris seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was Rome is of another day
I've been terribly alone and forgotten in Manhattan
I'm going home to my city by the Bay
I left my heart in San Francisco
High on a hill, it calls to me
To be where little cable cars climb halfway to the stars
The morning fog may chill the air, I don't care
My love waits there in San Francisco
Above the blue and windy sea
When I come home to you, San Francisco
Your golden sun will shine for me
My parody:
The music from the CD seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was TV is of another day
I'm not restless or alone or for granted in my world,
I'm coming here to the Garden anyway.
I leave my thoughts at Forum Garden
Right on this page, it calls to me.
To be here with all the friends who share many thoughts as well
The time may pass around me, but I find I don't care.
A post waits here at Forum Garden
Amongst the threads that I can see.
Where I come here to you, Forum Garden
My friends all smile and welcome me.
:-6
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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along-for-the-ride;1179009 wrote: Song lyrics count too.
This is a song by Tony Bennett (who also shares my birthday)
The loveliness of Paris seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was Rome is of another day
I've been terribly alone and forgotten in Manhattan
I'm going home to my city by the Bay
I left my heart in San Francisco
High on a hill, it calls to me
To be where little cable cars climb halfway to the stars
The morning fog may chill the air, I don't care
My love waits there in San Francisco
Above the blue and windy sea
When I come home to you, San Francisco
Your golden sun will shine for me
My parody:
The music from the CD seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was TV is of another day
I'm not restless or alone or for granted in my world,
I'm coming here to the Garden anyway.
I leave my thoughts at Forum Garden
Right on this page, it calls to me.
To be here with all the friends who share many thoughts as well
The time may pass around me, but I find I don't care.
A post waits here at Forum Garden
Amongst the threads that I can see.
Where I come here to you, Forum Garden
My friends all smile and welcome me.
:-6
When's your birthday? I share mine with Neil Sedaka...3/13:guitarist
This is a song by Tony Bennett (who also shares my birthday)
The loveliness of Paris seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was Rome is of another day
I've been terribly alone and forgotten in Manhattan
I'm going home to my city by the Bay
I left my heart in San Francisco
High on a hill, it calls to me
To be where little cable cars climb halfway to the stars
The morning fog may chill the air, I don't care
My love waits there in San Francisco
Above the blue and windy sea
When I come home to you, San Francisco
Your golden sun will shine for me
My parody:
The music from the CD seems somehow sadly gay
The glory that was TV is of another day
I'm not restless or alone or for granted in my world,
I'm coming here to the Garden anyway.
I leave my thoughts at Forum Garden
Right on this page, it calls to me.
To be here with all the friends who share many thoughts as well
The time may pass around me, but I find I don't care.
A post waits here at Forum Garden
Amongst the threads that I can see.
Where I come here to you, Forum Garden
My friends all smile and welcome me.
:-6
When's your birthday? I share mine with Neil Sedaka...3/13:guitarist
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qsducks;1179004 wrote: You said so AFTR....
Jack be quick
Jack be fast
Jack jump over the candlestick:wah:
:wah:
Nomie's fast
Nomie's quick
Nomie's got a funny schtick.
("Schtick" means a comedy routine.)
Jack be quick
Jack be fast
Jack jump over the candlestick:wah:
:wah:
Nomie's fast
Nomie's quick
Nomie's got a funny schtick.
("Schtick" means a comedy routine.)
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along-for-the-ride;1179015 wrote: :wah:
Nomie's fast
Nomie's quick
Nomie's got a funny schtick.
("Schtick" means a comedy routine.)
I know:yh_rotfl
Nomie's fast
Nomie's quick
Nomie's got a funny schtick.
("Schtick" means a comedy routine.)
I know:yh_rotfl
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Clodhopper;1178982 wrote: "Pas ce soir, AFTR"
But I'll have a go tomorrrow if I have the time.
Bon soir, mon amie.
But I'll have a go tomorrrow if I have the time.
Bon soir, mon amie.
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An excerpt from "The Lady of the Lake"
(I bet you know where this is going)
Just as the Hunter left his stand,And stood concealed amid the brake,To view this Lady of the Lake. The maiden paused, as if againShe thought to catch the distant strain.With head upraised, and look intent,And eye and ear attentive bent,And locks flung back, and lips apart,Like monument of Grecian art,In listening mood, she seemed to stand,The guardian Naiad of the strand.
My parody:
Just as ole Nomad left his stand,
And stood concealed amid the brake,
To view this wife of Peter Lake.
Now oscar paused, as if again
She thought to catch the distant strain.
With head upraised, and look intent,
And eye and ear attentive, bent,
And locks flung back, and lips apart,
Like monument of modern art,
In listening mood, she seemed to stand,
An FG guardian, strong and grand.
If you have read the posts between Nomad and Peter Lake, you will appreciate my parody. :wah:
(I bet you know where this is going)
Just as the Hunter left his stand,And stood concealed amid the brake,To view this Lady of the Lake. The maiden paused, as if againShe thought to catch the distant strain.With head upraised, and look intent,And eye and ear attentive bent,And locks flung back, and lips apart,Like monument of Grecian art,In listening mood, she seemed to stand,The guardian Naiad of the strand.
My parody:
Just as ole Nomad left his stand,
And stood concealed amid the brake,
To view this wife of Peter Lake.
Now oscar paused, as if again
She thought to catch the distant strain.
With head upraised, and look intent,
And eye and ear attentive, bent,
And locks flung back, and lips apart,
Like monument of modern art,
In listening mood, she seemed to stand,
An FG guardian, strong and grand.
If you have read the posts between Nomad and Peter Lake, you will appreciate my parody. :wah:
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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On the pages of the internet,
On the great site For-um Garden,
Lord Tomb-stone, the mighty,
He the Master of Life, descending,
On the forums of the website
Stood erect, and called the members,
Called the tribes of men together.
From his postings flowed a river,
Leaped into the light of morning,
O'er the linkage plunging onward
Gleamed like Galbally, the guru.
And the Nomad, stooping earthward,
With his finger on the keyboard
Typed a winding pathway for it,
Saying to it, "post in this way!"
On the great site For-um Garden,
Lord Tomb-stone, the mighty,
He the Master of Life, descending,
On the forums of the website
Stood erect, and called the members,
Called the tribes of men together.
From his postings flowed a river,
Leaped into the light of morning,
O'er the linkage plunging onward
Gleamed like Galbally, the guru.
And the Nomad, stooping earthward,
With his finger on the keyboard
Typed a winding pathway for it,
Saying to it, "post in this way!"
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Terrific, Sir Bryn Mawr! :-6:)
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qsducks;1179012 wrote: When's your birthday? I share mine with Neil Sedaka...3/13:guitarist
August 3rd.
August 3rd.
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Remember Fred Astaire singing this song to Ginger Rogers in that old 1930's movie?
The way you wear your hat
The way you sip your tea
The memory of all that
No they can't take that away from me
The way your smile just beams
The way you sing off key
The way you haunt my dreams
No they can't take that away from me
We may never never meet again, on that bumpy road to love
Still I'll always, always keep the memory of
The way you hold your knife
The way we danced till three
The way you changed my life
No they can't take that away from me
Here's my parody:
The way you want to chat
The way you want to tease
The memory of all that
No, they can't take that away from me.
The way your words just beam
The way you type off-key
They way you make me dream
No, they can't take that away from me.
We may never, never meet on Earth but in Heaven up above
And I'll always, always keep the memory of
The way you share your strife
The way we laugh with glee
The way you changed my life
No, they can't take that away from me.
No, they can't take that away from me.
The way you wear your hat
The way you sip your tea
The memory of all that
No they can't take that away from me
The way your smile just beams
The way you sing off key
The way you haunt my dreams
No they can't take that away from me
We may never never meet again, on that bumpy road to love
Still I'll always, always keep the memory of
The way you hold your knife
The way we danced till three
The way you changed my life
No they can't take that away from me
Here's my parody:
The way you want to chat
The way you want to tease
The memory of all that
No, they can't take that away from me.
The way your words just beam
The way you type off-key
They way you make me dream
No, they can't take that away from me.
We may never, never meet on Earth but in Heaven up above
And I'll always, always keep the memory of
The way you share your strife
The way we laugh with glee
The way you changed my life
No, they can't take that away from me.
No, they can't take that away from me.
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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The following is not a parody of any poem, or song or nursery rime.
I made it up me-self. I will return to add more lines, with more Forum Garden friends.
When she posts, she's not alone,
We all join in to post with Koan.
His posts appear so bold and bad.
We all see right through you, dear Nomad.
We all know we really need her;
Words of wit and wisdom from our Weeder.
Oscar admires that Gordon Brown.
Does this make Sir Peter frown?
When she posts, we join with glee
To chat and laugh with Carolly.
Jimbo's returned as Farmer Giles;
Is this a chapter from X-Files?
I made it up me-self. I will return to add more lines, with more Forum Garden friends.
When she posts, she's not alone,
We all join in to post with Koan.
His posts appear so bold and bad.
We all see right through you, dear Nomad.
We all know we really need her;
Words of wit and wisdom from our Weeder.
Oscar admires that Gordon Brown.
Does this make Sir Peter frown?
When she posts, we join with glee
To chat and laugh with Carolly.
Jimbo's returned as Farmer Giles;
Is this a chapter from X-Files?
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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these are excellent AFTR... how clever you are:D:D:guitarist
FOC THREAD PART1
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Martin Luther King Jr.
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Thanks, Kaz.
If it has a pro or con,
Listen carefully to Lon.
If you want to throw confetti,
Let's go party here with Chezzie.
Kaz just made this person smile,
So...I'll be back a little while.
If it has a pro or con,
Listen carefully to Lon.
If you want to throw confetti,
Let's go party here with Chezzie.
Kaz just made this person smile,
So...I'll be back a little while.
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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When you think of children spellin',
Hunting seashells--Kathy Ellen.
A girl who always helps us cope
With life's surprises, that's our Hope.
Her laughter's like a melody
To me. That's my friend, Odie.
Hunting seashells--Kathy Ellen.
A girl who always helps us cope
With life's surprises, that's our Hope.
Her laughter's like a melody
To me. That's my friend, Odie.
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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Just like that drawer with the dull-edged knives
Just like the memory of all his ex-wives
Just like an old book of all those past lives
Go all those threads into the archives.
:D
Just like the memory of all his ex-wives
Just like an old book of all those past lives
Go all those threads into the archives.
:D
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.