An insane lover

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koan
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An insane lover

Post by koan »

It's a shame to lose a perfectly good mind over love. But it happens.
kensloft
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An insane lover

Post by kensloft »

Nice poem.
Paula
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An insane lover

Post by Paula »

Get a new man, don't waste your time, there are many out there. :D
Everyone has these on their face? TULIPS.
polycarp
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An insane lover

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sanz wrote: Empty spaces and void,

were all for me to see.

Nothing was how

it was meant to be.

In thunders and storms,

there were silences.

In peace and quiet,

there were noises.

Faces frolicked when

none were around.

Voices were heard

when there was no sound.

They called me insane

and put me behind bars,

burdening my body

with many a scars.

I bore the pain

without a word,

in the hope that some day,

you would change my world.

But you weren’t there

ever for me.

Insane indeed was I

to wait for thee.
I love this poem, it makes a lot of sense to me. Nice effort sanz :cool:
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