I wrote this short poem ages ago, thought I'd share it with everyone:)
Waiting for Love
An aching heart, yet to be tamed,
An unknown love, yet to be named,
A burning desire, yet to be lit,
Those peaks of delight, yet to be hit
A heartfelt promise, yet to be said,
Those three words, still in my head,
The sweetest emotion, yet to be felt
The card of love, yet to be dealt.
Waiting for Love
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Mister Smith;883083 wrote: I wrote this short poem ages ago, thought I'd share it with everyone:)
Waiting for Love
An aching heart, yet to be tamed,
An unknown love, yet to be named,
A burning desire, yet to be lit,
Those peaks of delight, yet to be hit
A heartfelt promise, yet to be said,
Those three words, still in my head,
The sweetest emotion, yet to be felt
The card of love, yet to be dealt.Thats sooooo nice Smithy....I write poetry also and have had a couple published....anyway so well written;)
Waiting for Love
An aching heart, yet to be tamed,
An unknown love, yet to be named,
A burning desire, yet to be lit,
Those peaks of delight, yet to be hit
A heartfelt promise, yet to be said,
Those three words, still in my head,
The sweetest emotion, yet to be felt
The card of love, yet to be dealt.Thats sooooo nice Smithy....I write poetry also and have had a couple published....anyway so well written;)
Women are bitchy and predictable ...men are not and that's the key to knowing the truth.
Waiting for Love
Very nice and very true well done.
ALOHA!!
MOTTO TO LIVE BY:
"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, champagne in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming.
WOO HOO!!, what a ride!!!"
MOTTO TO LIVE BY:
"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, champagne in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming.
WOO HOO!!, what a ride!!!"
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Lovely poem Mr. Smith:-6
Thank you:-6
Thank you:-6
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At the time of that writing, you must have been looking for love "in all the wrong places." I hope you have since found it.
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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Hey peeps!
Thanks for the comments:)
I'll prob post another poem later
Thanks for the comments:)
I'll prob post another poem later