Waiting for Love

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Mister Smith
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I wrote this short poem ages ago, thought I'd share it with everyone:)

Waiting for Love

An aching heart, yet to be tamed,

An unknown love, yet to be named,

A burning desire, yet to be lit,

Those peaks of delight, yet to be hit

A heartfelt promise, yet to be said,

Those three words, still in my head,

The sweetest emotion, yet to be felt

The card of love, yet to be dealt.
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Omni_Skittles
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Post by Omni_Skittles »

That was sweet :-6
Smoke signals ftw!
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Post by Carolly »

Mister Smith;883083 wrote: I wrote this short poem ages ago, thought I'd share it with everyone:)

Waiting for Love

An aching heart, yet to be tamed,

An unknown love, yet to be named,

A burning desire, yet to be lit,

Those peaks of delight, yet to be hit

A heartfelt promise, yet to be said,

Those three words, still in my head,

The sweetest emotion, yet to be felt

The card of love, yet to be dealt.Thats sooooo nice Smithy....I write poetry also and have had a couple published....anyway so well written;)
Women are bitchy and predictable ...men are not and that's the key to knowing the truth.
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Post by CARLA »

Very nice and very true well done. :cool:
ALOHA!!

MOTTO TO LIVE BY:

"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, champagne in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming.

WOO HOO!!, what a ride!!!"

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Kathy Ellen
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Post by Kathy Ellen »

Lovely poem Mr. Smith:-6

Thank you:-6
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Post by along-for-the-ride »

At the time of that writing, you must have been looking for love "in all the wrong places." I hope you have since found it.:)
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Mister Smith
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Post by Mister Smith »

Hey peeps!

Thanks for the comments:)

I'll prob post another poem later
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