Us Two

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jones jones
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Us Two

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Pinky;840427 wrote: Washed forever with blue

Overcoated with grey

Sombre is the hue

That my soul portrays

For those that look deeper

Than the merry façade

That has no keeper

Bitter and hard.

A heart so warped

That it cannot feel

An iceberg personified

Krypton wrapped in steel.

I’d die a thousand deaths

Just to let you in

Submit a thousand breaths

To vanquish all my sin

Just to be with you,

Just us two.




hi pinky ...

this is a quite beautiful piece of prose ... it portrays a feeling of such longing for love and the understanding that despite this person's heart being warped ... unfeeling and cold ... they would die a thousand times just to be with the one they love!
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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