When I Look Around Me

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Pheasy
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When I Look Around Me

When I look around me,

My daughter needs to play,

When I look around me,

My son needs me to see,

When I look around me,

My husband needs to know,

When I look around me,

My pets say, we need you,

When I look around me,

I see you all.
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chonsigirl
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The beautiful things you see around you, so nicely written Pheasy!
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CARLA
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Post by CARLA »

Very nice Pheasy beautiful. When I look around all I see is the furniture needs dusting. :wah::wah:
ALOHA!!

MOTTO TO LIVE BY:

"Life should NOT be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand, champagne in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming.

WOO HOO!!, what a ride!!!"

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jones jones
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:-4Pheasy;833506 wrote: When I Look Around Me

When I look around me,

My daughter needs to play,

When I look around me,

My son needs me to see,

When I look around me,

My husband needs to know,

When I look around me,

My pets say, we need you,

When I look around me,

I see you all.


hmmmmmmm ... honey ... seems to me everyone of your family needs or wants a piece of you ... as britney would say ...

when they gonna give you a piece of them!!!!

Jj
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
pinkchick
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Pheasy;833506 wrote: When I Look Around Me

When I look around me,

My daughter needs to play,

When I look around me,

My son needs me to see,

When I look around me,

My husband needs to know,

When I look around me,

My pets say, we need you,

When I look around me,

I see you all.


Very nice Pheasy :-4:-4
Very nearly perfect ... :D
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jones jones
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pinkchick;834399 wrote: Very nice Pheasy :-4:-4


like you pinky!!!

Jj :-4
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
qsducks
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Post by qsducks »

all i'm seeing right now is a messy bedroom:wah:
Debo
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Post by Debo »

Cute write Pheasy:

When I look all around me I see way to many chores

Yet if I focus and look even further I see a shade tree

And a cold lemonade.

It is calling me I can hear it whisper.
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