Once Again In Love

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jones jones
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Sleepily she looks at me

With love lustrous eyes

Skin damp and glistening

Breasts rising and falling

We have come together

Once again in love.
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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Post by along-for-the-ride »

Up he jumps to take a hot shower......

Has to be at work in an hour.

Baby starts to cry in the other room.

Whatever happened to the bride and groom?
Life is a Highway. Let's share the Commute.
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Post by Geronimo »

oops! :confused: :-5 :wah:

the first one is really sweet :-4

the second verse is quite a choking ride..

maybe we will stay home today,.,. :-3 :p
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Post by Jerry »

First is :-4 Second is true.
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But both are true, arent they?

like making love between 5 and 5:30 in the morning, or 6 and 6:30 if you are lucky..:p :rolleyes: :D
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Post by jones jones »

geronimo and jerry ...

thanx guys ... i .. i ... i think?

Jj :-4
"…I hate how I don’t feel real enough unless people are watching." — Chuck Palahniuk, Invisible Monsters
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