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koan
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Post by koan »

An amethyst of healing love

Reflected in your eyes

You hold before you many keys

To unlocking my disguise.

Beyond each shadow cast in vain

Its secrets to unfold

You hold the lighted candle forth

Vanquishing the cold.

We tread the ancient ruins of

Historical demise

As past and present start to blend

Despite the fearful cries.

There is no threat of losing faith

No fear of endings near

As hand in hand we close our eyes

And into darkness peer.

There within the darkness lies

The simple seed of love

And with it anything can be

Created as above.

Just as above so is below

A journey to be free

To foster life and watch it grow

Independently.
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abbey
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Post by abbey »

A perfect poem for today, lovely.
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Post by polycarp »

Koan, I can't go wrong for loving you, you're just too good. The poem is beautiful and deligently articulated.
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kensloft
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Post by kensloft »

Your poetry is quite inspiring.

As is everything that you do.

Dreams which grow, aspiring

Many to dream of life with you.

Within the beauty of your lines

There dwells the worlds of life.

Where life is led by your signs

Taking us away from much strife.

A fluidity by which the words flow,

Paints pictures as if from above.

And inside my heart I feel it grow,

The ever present touch of your love.

My heart blossoms from this joy.

Its growth thrives to makes me be

Humbled by the graces you employ

That give to me, at last, true liberty!
koan
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Post by koan »

kensloft :-4

That my poetry inspires the man who inspires them is quite wonderful.
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Post by kensloft »

koan wrote: kensloft :-4

That my poetry inspires the man who inspires them is quite wonderful.


I love you

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