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I wrote this and have never shown to anyone here before...........get yer hanky ready............



A Dogs Life





As I lay here in my basket

I think about the past

Those days when I chased rabbits...........Oh I run so fast

I never ever hurt them, i just liked to play

And if I saw they were babies

I just turned and went away

I would always look after my mistress.........and I loved her so

No matter where she went I would always go

But then one day she went away

And never said Goodbye, I was so unhappy and it really made me cry

They said she had gone to heaven

Wherever that may be............

Why didn't she take me with her........I wouldn't have been naughty you see

Then I was taken to this place

That is so cold and grey

They locked me in a cage and then they went away

I dont want to eat and oh I am so cold

Dosen't anybody want me now I am growing old?

But wait........am I dreaming

Is somebody taking me away?

PLEASE let it be......if only for just a day

Where am I going and what is to become of me

Won't somebody love me just like it used to be

I am now in a room and there is a funny smell

There is a man in a white coat

And theres other dogs here as well

He is picking me up and stroking my head

He tells me I will be alright

So why am I worried instead?

Suddenly I feel so tired and my eyes just want to close

I think I will go to sleep now and dream of long ago

Goodnight and Goodbye

I can hardly lift my head

So maybe now at last I can have a nice long rest

I just now want to sleep I feel as light as air

Everything looks beautiful and I feel I haven't a care

OH!!!I cant believe it................my mistress is sudenly here

She is giving me lots of cuddles

And saying she will always be near....................

I don't care what has happened to me in the past

I know THIS must be heaven

And I'm happy again.................at last......
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Aww...that's so true. Nice one, Carolly :-1
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Thats wonderful Carol - made me cry - excellent poem :-6
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RedGlitter;696186 wrote: Aww...that's so true. Nice one, Carolly :-1


Than ks babe xxx
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ThePheasant;696190 wrote: Thats wonderful Carol - made me cry - excellent poem :-6
Thanks love.....I wrote it and yet it still brings a lump to my throat.......who knows what goes on in their little minds..........good to see you xx
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Post by Carolly »

Thought Id bring this back for the dog lovers even though its sad:(
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awwwwwwwwww that was so lovely Petal :-1
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kayleneaussie;888204 wrote: awwwwwwwwww that was so lovely Petal :-1Fanks Kay....Gotta say that Im proud of it;)
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well done carol:):-4




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Now I feel like crap as I have just found out that Hope has to have her beloved dog put down and she read this.....must have been hard.....I wouldn't have put it on if I would have known:(
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Carolly;888311 wrote: Now I feel like crap as I have just found out that Hope has to have her beloved dog put down and she read this.....must have been hard.....I wouldn't have put it on if I would have known:(


dont be silly:rolleyes: of course you wer'nt to know ..im sure hope understands. Its part of life Carol,, like we know its not all sweet smelling roses. :-4




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koochikoo;888324 wrote: Carol, thats very good. And very sad, its making me cry. :-1Doing well aint I:-5:-5
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Carolly;888396 wrote: Doing well aint I:-5:-5


:wah:well it is sad innit carol:rolleyes::wah:




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kazalala;888401 wrote: :wah:well it is sad innit carol:rolleyes::wah:Ye I know............sad old cow aint I:thinking::-2
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Post by Carolly »

Must write another one as happy as this:-3:rolleyes:
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I don't even own a dog, but that was very nice Carolly.
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qsducks;888743 wrote: I don't even own a dog, but that was very nice Carolly.Ahhhh fanks babexxxx;)
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qsducks;888743 wrote: I don't even own a dog, but that was very nice Carolly.


What Ducky said Carol:-4

Your pets are like your children...lubs them all:-4
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Kathy Ellen;888855 wrote: What Ducky said Carol:-4

Your pets are like your children...lubs them all:-4You better believe it;)
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That's a very nice poem:)
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Mister Smith;894301 wrote: That's a very nice poem:)
I appreciate that....... thanks;)
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Bad Carol,

That's not the first time you made my eyes leak! :-1
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abbey;894720 wrote: Bad Carol,

That's not the first time you made my eyes leak! :-1PHEW YOU GOT ME WORRIED THEN GIRL!!!:wah::wah:;)
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