The Illusion

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Bryn Mawr
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Great poem but I hope you're a long way from crossing the Rainbow Bridge yet :-6
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guppy
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awww.thats great pinky..sorrowfull but really good.....
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Debo
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Here I dwell yet,

awaiting the path

wishing it hadn't led me

to my own aftermath.

Another one of your delightful writes

the ending says it all.
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