Missing You

polycarp
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Post by polycarp »

When you’re away

Living turns a dreadful adventure

Fraught with infested thoughts

Of needless wherefores



I vainly seek answers

To paradoxical questions

Drawn from the wells

Of abject distraught



Missing you

Drills a chasm in my life

Unfilled by your absent laughs and smiles

Leaving me like a flower

The bees have deserted

Having lost its nectar
A formula for tact: "Be brief politely, be aggressive smilingly, be emphatic pleasantly, be positive diplomatically, be right graciously".
Paula
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Post by Paula »

I'm right here..how lovely, i miss you too! ;)
Everyone has these on their face? TULIPS.
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capt_buzzard
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Post by capt_buzzard »

I'm right here beside you. :driving:
Paula
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Post by Paula »

I'll be over tomorrow. Don't tell anyone! :sneaky:
Everyone has these on their face? TULIPS.
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capt_buzzard
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Post by capt_buzzard »

Paula wrote: I'll be over tomorrow. Don't tell anyone! :sneaky: Bring an Umbrella :wah:
Paula
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Post by Paula »

capt_buzzard wrote: Bring an Umbrella :wah:


Just an Umbrella? Aren't we going fishing...my poles are packed. I have raingear, i'll bring MY umbrella too. :)
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polycarp
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Post by polycarp »

Hello guys, thanks for the cool responses. Paula, expecting you with your raingear and umbrella. I'll take you to where the river never dries and th sun never sets.
A formula for tact: "Be brief politely, be aggressive smilingly, be emphatic pleasantly, be positive diplomatically, be right graciously".
koan
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Post by koan »

Took me a while to think of a response to this one. I suppose I try not to let myself miss anyone that much. Then I realized that when my daughter goes away for more than the weekend I feel this way. You are bold and passionate in the voice you give to this emotion.
polycarp
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Post by polycarp »

Coan wrote "You are bold and passionate in the voice you give to this emotion".

As a man with so much love to I offer, I get emotional and truly feel that way when I miss a loved one. Could there be a different way of expressing such an emotion other than verse?
A formula for tact: "Be brief politely, be aggressive smilingly, be emphatic pleasantly, be positive diplomatically, be right graciously".

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