Group Poetry 3

koan
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Group Poetry 3

Post by koan »

Talk to me, hear me, know that I am

And teach me to be like a lamb.

Feel me and see me and touch me with love

'Cause, sometimes, I don't give a damn.

Hold me and tell me that life will work out

No matter my choice of the route.

And somehow there is a great plan to my life

That I just haven't learned yet about.

Sorry to anyone who pronounces that "root".
koan
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Group Poetry 3

Post by koan »

You know what? I kinda like this the way it is. Short and sweet.
polycarp
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Group Poetry 3

Post by polycarp »

Cool poem Coan, have you thought of a title for it?
A formula for tact: "Be brief politely, be aggressive smilingly, be emphatic pleasantly, be positive diplomatically, be right graciously".

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