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chonsigirl
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*sigh*:-4

Beautifully crafted, Pinky!
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Wolverine
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went a little overboard with the tats there didn't ya??


Get your mind out of the gutter - it's blocking my view

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Totally AWESOME!
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Pinky;449268 wrote: The sun sets for the final time

hues of red, gold, violet, blue

rainclouds stir and smother the sky

the landscape cries it's moonlit dew.

souless stars in their pitiless sky

betray their smirking scorn;

no pity do they hold for the seeker

that chases after dreams unborn.

I could walk for a lifetime

longing to discover, to find

a ray of light on the horizon

to chase the shadows from my mind.




I love that part. :) Very, very nice, Pinky.
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beautiful and very moving....muppet.:)
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