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*reading it
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not yet, not until i read more ... it's a good start though.
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i finished reading it. :) is it going to be in chapters? if that's the first chapter i might suggest that you take the last paragraph and use it for the start of chapter 2 and maybe have the leaflet coming into play after the time has passed. you have a very good framework there.
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hahaha... no, you have a very cool tone to your writing and chose a good theme for your ability. it needs to be shined up, of course, but i think it will be well worth your effort.
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:-6

randall's writing career,

Hundreds of thousands of words written.

A few short stories completed.

Most books never got past the first chapter

Did win a short story competition in the English evening paper in Hong Kong - Prize - a nice wrist watch.

Forty years ago at least I thought of the start of a poem but never could past the following

"I had Dreams,

And had the means,

To make my dreams come true.

BUT............."

Shortly after that I decided to write my life story but didn't get far past the title

"Portrait Of A Failure."

Result,.

Still tapping away.

God bless all.

randall.

:)
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*awaits update*
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Can't wait for the rest!

I love reading and get through at least two books a week, please let me know when you've done some more work on it and i'll do my review for you :)
I am nobody..nobody is perfect...therefore I must be Perfect!





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