If I Could [a softer song]

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Lane
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If I Could [a softer song]

Post by Lane »

OK Oscar this is it. its so funny how the story behind the music leans in a different direction..you might not even like this kind of music...lol



I wanted to say something about Love, Loss, Hope and Fear..

forgive the video, I`m not the best at that stuff..still working on it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpgL0WdV1CE


If I Could

Damn the night, damn the fear in this heart,

and every word that tore Us apart.

If I could back-up to Our last good-by,

and take back every alibi...

chorus:

If I Could,

could You love.

Damn the night,damn this wanting in Me,

the little things I just couldn`t see.

If We could give it one more try,

take away all the hurting inside..

chorus:

If I Could,

could You love.

Bridge:

All of the memories

are a part of Me..

and the life I`ve lived, theres this tragedy.

If I could change it all,bring Us back somehow,

I`d sit down to write a brand new history.



Damn the night,damn this wanting in Me,

the little things I just couldn`t see.

If We could give it one more try,

take away all the hurting inside..

chorus:

If I Could,

could You love...

If I Could,

could You love...Me.

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If I Could [a softer song]

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That actually brought a lump to my throat.

That's the art of writing music, to touch ' something' In the listener.

Very proffessional !!! I think you have an awesome talent there.
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If I Could [a softer song]

Post by Lane »

oscar;1395894 wrote: That actually brought a lump to my throat.

That's the art of writing music, to touch ' something' In the listener.

Very proffessional !!! I think you have an awesome talent there.



thank you Oscar..you know someone else struggles and sometimes yours doesn`t seem so bad. kinda like "i cried when I had no shoes..till I saw a man with no feet. I have always found other stories far more emotional. the story behind this..

I write on different sites and I read this young girl`s work. sad stuff. got to talking with her and sharing notes. I mean she was young,15-16. In the notes she kept telling me about her father leaving and how she wished she had him back, and how could He leave her. If I could" keeps coming up in the conversations..if I could have been prettier, if I could have talked to him, and so much more. it all revolved around love, she even asked me if I could do all that do you think he would come back for me? she about had me in tears..

I finished the song hung it out there and the comments were about a love story between two..so I made the video to fit that.

I really thought this would effect women far more than men, out of about 1000 hits, I swear there wasn`t 10 women comment. all men. thats the story its a conversation with a little girl....lol

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